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flametwirler

Shrine Prostitute Update - yipee!

Dec 01, 2007 19:58

So 'Chapter 14: Devotion' is here.

The choice of websites is as follows:
AFF
MediaMiner
FanFictionAll versions are the same this chapter so just have fun picking your sites ( Read more... )

fanfiction, iyfg, real life, shrine prostitute, inuyasha

Comments 4

Comment? anonymous December 2 2007, 04:11:21 UTC

I really, truly, like how your story is turning out.
At first I was just reading it for fun, but as I read on it began to develop more plot, and depth, and now its working to become something really great.
It opens your eyes up to issues in life people never really talk about aloud, and even though we don't have youkai and hanyou here in real life, we still have the same issues in terms of race.
You've really given me something to look forward to.
I know bumps in life like your job may get you down, but please don't ever give up on your writing, it may not seem like much now with just this one little story, someday you may change the world with what you foresee .

Re: Comment? flametwirler December 2 2007, 04:19:03 UTC

I can change the world, eh? haha. I kid, I really think we all can. A movement is really only started with one person who inspires someone else. It's just a pyramid scheme in disguise ^_ ( ... )

Re: Comment? anonymous December 2 2007, 21:59:41 UTC

LOL a pyramid scheme in disguise huh? What you trying to scam us all into lol

Its pretty horrible to find out that something like that is true, if people are so ashamed of doing something that they have to kill a helpless child, then they damn well shouldn't be doing it in the first place!
People are so stupid sometimes. I'm impressed with what you've found out though, you've inspired me greatly. I think I'll research the topic further.

You should keep adding to your story, people need to open there eyes and I think your doing a damn good job with it. Go ahead and put your frustrations in, if more people thought like that we'd have a much better place to live. ^-^

anonymous December 10 2007, 16:09:14 UTC

I can't wait to read the next chapter!
the last was good but I really miss Inuyasha I'm eager to read what he will think about kagome's mission on the hanyou world!
I hope ch.15 will be out soon,
good writing!
Ale.