Shrine Prostitute Update

[flametwirler]

So I got another chapter pushed out. Yay me. Gah, 8000+ words. Can I plead that as my excuse for almost always taking a month or more to update? Please? haha, jk.

This chapter was kind of fun to write, but I think I've discovered it's just much easier for me to write Inuyasha and Kagome's interaction as opposed to societal politics of any sort. I

Comments

[calophi]

That was you? Huh! I'd almost completely forgotten I read that fic. I was sad that it wasn't done but I think I'd read it on aff.net where you can't set it to alert you when it updates or mark things as favorites so you can come back later and actually see WTF you read. ::hates aff.net:: XD

[flametwirler]

What, me? Where?

Guh, that is my least favorite thing about aff.net and pretty much the main reason I stick around ff.net - they have alerts, author/story favorites - you know, ways to find the stories you were interested in. Seriously, why behind the times? (and on a separate but related tangent, why on mm.org can't you see other people's lists? I find so many awesome stories/authors through those!)
/rant here

I understand the not done thing though. Even to this day I only rarely read stories that aren't finished, so I sympathize (especially since my updates take so freaking long every time.)

I'm glad to hear you liked it at one point at least though. ^_- *Cheers*

[calophi]

None of my stories are finished either, so don't feel bad. =D

I don't have a problem with unfinished stories. If I read them on ff.net I set them to story alert, and I've alerted stories that have finished two years later. It's worth the re-read. =D

[landofthekwt]

Really enjoyed this chapter where Kagome stood up for Inuyasha
against her friend and the police and Inuyasha went after Kagome when he thought something had happened to her.

[flametwirler]

Yay! I'm glad. I just liked getting them into situations where they relied on each other and had to trust in each other's reactions more than they realized (or thought they could).

[madmiko]

It's always interesting to me how a plot can dictate you having to write things you aren't necessarily interested in or comfortable with. And I'm actually glad to hear you say you left off a scene so you could see if you could move the story along without having to use that device. I thought I was the only one who did that. LOL! (It didn't work for me.)

[flametwirler]

Yeah, this plot device has been in play in my mind for a good solid few months at the very least. It's just that now that the time for writing scenes that lead directly to the events (so I'll have no way to back out later if I really don't like it) I got cold feet at the last minute. Ha, I'm so silly.

And I had no idea that anyone else did that either so it makes me so happy to hear you say that. Ah, we're so silly.

Yeah, I'm pretty sure it won't work for me either, but I just had to hold onto that last little bit of hope. Oh well. *bye bye hope*

(Maybe when I finally put it in I'll have to come check and see whether it feels odd to anyone else or just me. Meh.)

[valdemar303]

I'm late again...
I was very pleased with this chapter! Initially I found really strange for Inuyasha to leave the shrine like that. I thought about some chapters ago and how scared (even if I'm not sure scared is the right word here) about going among other people.
But still, Inuyasha is very implulsive in the anime and this story was always in character so I coulnd't truly find something to object in the way you portrayed him.
Loved the restroom scene. It felt like inuyasha was just a little kid in need of some much needed love. I want to give him an hug there!
And the previous exchange:

He must be a damn good lay!”
She didn’t even pause as she answered, “The best"made my fist bump the air in cheers for Kagome

[flametwirler]

Wow, I'm really late to the reply. Sorries