Title: A Prize to Win, A Prize to Protect
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pj1228Prompt: A homicide puts Lacroix on top of the suspect list. Is Nick willing to help? Is Lacroix willing to accept help from Nick?
Length: 8,246 words
Rating: PG
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A Prize to Win, A Prize to Protect )
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Great sense of the relationships, especially Nick's love/hate/dunno with LaCroix, and his camaraderie with and teasing respect for Schanke.
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Lacroix behaves remarkably well while in custody. Of course he had a reason to do so. :)
I also like the fact that he refused to give in to Acacius' advances. The fact that he does not take anyone, emphasizes how very special Nick is to him.
And Nick's eagerness to help Lacroix by solving the crime speaks volumes.
Thank you so much for this wonderful tale!
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I also like the fact that he refused to give in to Acacius' advances. The fact that he does not take anyone, emphasizes how very special Nick is to him.
That was exactly what I was going for. And, the fact that he wouldn't let Acacius force him into anything, just like with Divia. Even though this was set in the second season I had to give a few "nods" to third season's "Ashes to Ashes."
In any case, I'm so glad you liked it since I wanted to take it further but ran out of time, lol.
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There's always room for a sequel... ;)
Did you say you started this new from scratch 2 weeks ago? Now I'm curious what you had originally in mind.
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I cannot particularly comment on those aspects of your story, and I apologize for that. I hope that people who make their home bases in this genre will come comment on your story for you!That's quite alright. I realize it's not everyone's cup of Ribena, lol. You might find it surprising that in a certain way, I share your uneasiness on the topic. I will not deny that I am a "Cousin," but my stories--when focused on Nick and Lacroix--are generally focused on their familial relationship. I like to write about their father and son relationship. I have never written them as lovers, and yet, I know that most of my fellow Cousins, and therefore my audience, doesn't mind it and some even want it. So, my solution to that problem is to include enough references and hints that the reader can take it any way he or she chooses. Schanke was repulsed at the idea, but one might say Lacroix was, too, and that's why he refused. As you quite accurately stated, what happened in "Ashes ( ... )
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