Comments | fivil: fic: heroes, ando(/)hiro, pg.

fivil

fic: heroes, ando(/)hiro, pg.

Apr 13, 2007 14:13

I figured I've been writing this since January so about friggin' time I finished it and posted it.

untranslatables in between us
fandom: heroes
pairing: hiro(/)ando - more friendshippy or pre-slash than actual slash
rating: pg
word count: ~1,800
warning: includes hiro's thoughts on yaoi.disclaimer: Tim Kring and all those awesome people own ( Read more... )

tv: heroes, fic, fic: heroes

Comments 19

indyhat April 13 2007, 13:38:02 UTC

Heheh. I enjoyed this, thank you. I really dig the Japanese idiom (getting tangled in each other's knees!) :-D

fivil April 13 2007, 17:03:22 UTC

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading. :)

Yeah, I also liked those little phrases/idioms.

acaciaonnastik April 13 2007, 15:24:01 UTC

Oh, this is all just so sweet and awesome and yayful.

fivil April 13 2007, 17:07:37 UTC

Eee, thank you!

theladyemichan April 13 2007, 18:21:53 UTC

I liked it a lot! There is not enough Ando in fan fiction these days! I love how Ando used comic book/nerd terms to talk to Hiro, and the image of them hanging out and studying together and just being cute. The format with the Japanese phrases was really cool, too. Great job!

fivil April 13 2007, 18:49:52 UTC

Yeah, more Ando fic is needed, definitely. Especially when I feel unsure about his character in canon.. He looks like one who might die at some point. Anyhoo, yeah, thanks for reading, glad you liked it. :)

mystery_sock April 13 2007, 18:26:40 UTC

That's adorable. I love any use of Japanese in Heroes fic - and I love the bond between Hiro and Ando. You did a great job describing it. Yay!

fivil April 13 2007, 18:50:40 UTC

I love use of Japanese when it's at least semi-correct and fitting. With Ando&Hiro fic it seems like a must, in one way or another. Anyway, glad you liked it.

likeahobbit April 13 2007, 18:57:09 UTC

::worships you::

I loooooooooooved it and I was just about beating my head into the wall for a lack of Hiro/Ando fanfiction. You get many cookies.

I enjoyed all the 'geeky' shout outs and at first I was all 'sweet, I know them all' and then I was a tad embarassed. :) I also liked that you left their relationship ambiguous (though, being a slasher, I was completely shipping them as a couple).

1000 internets to you.

fivil April 13 2007, 21:36:19 UTC

Hehe, I know how you feel. At first I felt awesome for being able to write about geeky stuff but then I was like, "Wait, that makes me such a nerd! Dammit!".

Yeah, the story can work as both gen and slash, I guess. I have no objection to the pairing in a slashy way though I'm more into them as friends.

Thanks for the internets! &Glad you liked. :)