Fic: Pasta Simpatico

Sep 24, 2010 22:03

From this prompt at sherlockbbc_fic requesting underfed John, and Sherlock trying to surreptitiously get him to eat regularly ( Read more... )

sherlock, fic, food

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quamquam20 September 25 2010, 04:03:07 UTC
Despite the ample warning, I'm still shocked by how hungry this made me. A+ food porn and an all around fantastic fic.

I absolutely love the bit about why Sherlock needs him and this:
Explaining would have been so much more difficult, and putting a name to what John really was would be more difficult still.

Perfect :)

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firiel44 September 25 2010, 19:31:31 UTC
As many times as I read it re-writing and editing, I never managed to become immune to the lure of the pasta. It's kind of amazing.

Thanks for reading! I like that their relationship isn't easily defined, though that does sometimes make them harder to write. Glad you enjoyed it! :)

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yamx September 25 2010, 12:45:41 UTC
This is lovely. You really captured the way Sherlock cares about (and for) John but would never come right out and admit it.

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firiel44 September 25 2010, 20:02:38 UTC
Of course he can't say something outright. That would be obvious and boring. ;) Glad you liked it!

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OP Here! liveforforever September 25 2010, 19:17:40 UTC
Woo! Another fill! And such a lovely one, too.

It was such a bizarrely specific request that I honestly didn't expect anyone to take an interest. I'm delighted that you did! It's gorgeous.
Thank you :D

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Re: OP Here! firiel44 September 25 2010, 19:22:42 UTC
Thank you! I had a great time writing it, and hunting up pasta recipes to feed the muse when it was making me too hungry. :)

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stupid_drawings September 26 2010, 05:09:41 UTC
Aaaaaawwwwww, Sherlock! So caring in his own way.

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charamei September 26 2010, 09:29:07 UTC
Explaining would have been so much more difficult, and putting a name to what John really was would be more difficult still.

Oh, this, a thousand times this.

I'm sorry to say that I'm every bit as immune to foodporn as I am to normal porn (making me... afoodie? :p ), but this was still fantastic just for their relationship, Sherlock looking after John, and that line. It's perfect.

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