Comments | fire_rose17: And All's Right With the World: Part 3

fire_rose17

And All's Right With the World: Part 3

Oct 04, 2013 16:11

Okay, folks. This is it, the last part. Maybe someday I make this into a full chaptered thing, but for now, this is it. I think an Eva/CG crossover would be a little too much to handle right now. It is something I would like to try eventually, although I'm torn between asking for a co-writer to help me out (I work so much better that way), or ( Read more... )

evangelion, fanfic, code geass

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THANK YOU!!! <3 fleshisyummy October 9 2013, 10:41:08 UTC

Okay, I'm sorry for taking forever to get back to this!! I wanted to fully appreciate your writing, and I feel like I've been too tried lately, so I decided to read it while feeling more energized! I'm so happy you've continued this! You have no idea!

Your writing is just really smooth and beautiful, and I feel like you convey all the scenes wonderfully.

I really like the beginning where Suzaku is uncomfortable with his flightsuit because damn is that thing tight, and, in Eva, it's made clear that the pilots are kind of uncomfortable with them sometimes. And also, this line is just great: He wasn’t uncomfortable with his body per se, but that didn’t mean he enjoyed walking around in glorified fetish wear.Cecile was great in this. She has to carry out her job, but she also feels such sympathy for Suzaku just like in the show. I feel like you conveyed that perfectly ( ... )

YOU'RE WELCOME!!!! fire_rose17 October 9 2013, 14:12:10 UTC

I've always pictured Suzaku as one incredibly at home in his own body, but those suits are ridiculous. You'd think that would be murder on the balls ( ... )