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valhalla37 August 17 2009, 14:43:19 UTC
Gaaaaaaaaaah. I assume this is the AU you were talking about writing, and honestly? You destroyed me with this. The pain here is so palpable, but it's so perfectly offset by Dan's detached calm -- it makes it completely chilling, and vividly real. I mean, I could see this scenario for a post-5x08 Dan in canon anyway, but here you take it up a notch and really make it an incredible well-crafted, realistic possibility. Great work.

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findaconstant August 17 2009, 14:51:30 UTC
Actually, it isn't the AU! It's just... something that randomly hit me, and honestly, I really didn't mean for it to end that way, but. Well. It did.

As soon as I finished, I said "ow" outloud. D:

BUT. Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it! I look forward to your feedback. :D I think I may post it on the fanfic comm~

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valhalla37 August 17 2009, 15:20:45 UTC
Do it! :D

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