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TORCHWOOD: Children

Feb 10, 2009 03:11

Title: Children
Characters/Pairing: Jack, Ianto
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG
Summary: "Do you know what it's like losing a child, Captain Harkness?"
Notes: Written for tw100.
Disclaimer: Torchwood and all characters belong to the BBC. I am not affiliated with the BBC, and am not making any money from this.

( I don't use words like love, 'cause words like that don't matter... )

character: dw: ianto jones, for: comm: tw100, character: dw: jack harkness, fandom: doctor who/torchwood

Comments 13

topgeargirl2 February 10 2009, 10:26:46 UTC

very good

allfireburns February 10 2009, 10:28:25 UTC

Thank you.

lionessvalenti February 10 2009, 10:43:44 UTC

Ow.

A little bit of my heart just broke for Jack.

allfireburns February 10 2009, 10:56:00 UTC

A little bit of my heart broke writing it.

Also, I forgot how hard it is to write drabbles. I had to try this about five different ways before it would come out in a form that would actually fit in 100 words.

hab318princess February 10 2009, 20:33:33 UTC

beautiful, the last line was heartbreaking - great drabble

allfireburns February 10 2009, 21:34:36 UTC

Thank you!

jo02 February 11 2009, 22:33:58 UTC

Oh! Very good.

allfireburns February 11 2009, 22:43:18 UTC

Thank you!

redfulcrum February 12 2009, 02:07:56 UTC

wow... really good take on the prompt.

poor jack... brought a tear to this cynical eye.

allfireburns February 12 2009, 02:15:37 UTC

Thank you very much!