Labyrinth fic

[figuring_fish]

Ok, so I have started a fan fic for The Labyrinth. But I'm stuck. I can't figure out how Jareth would respond in the situation. Any suggestions would be amazing.

Ten years have passed since Sarah solved the labyrinth, but her life has not worked out at all. So she goes back to the neighborhood where she lived, to the park she starts in in the movie

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[darkangel_wings]

I can see him being snarky and saying something like "I'm crushed you don't remember/recognize me," or something along those lines. But I don't know if that really fits the mood of the moment. =/ Saying her name again would seem redundant, and just saying "hello" back wouldn't be dramatic enough for him. That's a tough one. Saying "hello, [some descriptive word here]" might be a little better, but I don't know.
>=/

I'll think about it more, and let you know if I think of anything.

Also, I want to read this fic.

[figuring_fish]

XD thanks. I changed it a bit so Sarah asks who's there and he does say "I'm hurt that you don't remember me." Unfortuently, I've having a hard time getting a handle on Jareth especailly, but also Sarah to some degree. This is the opening scene, and I can't get through it.
Then again I don't hardly know where I'm going. I figure she'll come back to the Labyrinth with Jareth, and once there slowly get to know him and fall in love with him. But I have no idea how to accomplish any of that.
I have one scene where Jareth tells Sarah about another girl who solved the labyrinth (the basis for the book Sarah had). And how he loved her and then came Sarah. I figure that can help them get to knpw each other and her to understand him and start to fall for him. (or possibly admit she's fallen for him)
I don't know. We'll see where it goes, if it does go. And yes yu can read it, if I ever get anywhere. XD