One more day in Paradise - part one

[fighter_of_moon]

He knew that he was just a mere replacement. He knew he wasn’t the one who was truly needed, yet he couldn’t stop this. He loved him with all his heart and he would do anything for him…even selling his soul and body to him.

Koki stifled a yawn before raising his head a little. The dimmed light of the bedroom made him think he was alone, but he

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[imangelofmusic]

i liked it so far ^^

[fighter_of_moon]

yay, thanks XD i was kind of worried since it's my 1st Kokame and co.
but I'm glad that you like it <3

thanks for reading *hugs*

[fighter_of_moon]

oh, and Merry Christmas *ho ho ho*

[aroruae]

Oh, Doamne, ce te-as bate =)))

I have to say that I truly hate Kokame xD Maybe others would pity Koki but I just felt annoyed by him. But I loved the last scene where he saw Kame and Jin *evil grin* What? I really don't like the guy >.<

Yeah, yeah, I know this isn't Akame. Then Jin will be the Cupid? =)) Now this would be funny, but appropriate since you said that Jin still loves Kame. You should have said how much time had passed for Kame to forget Jin and fall in love with Koki. Or you did? If Kazuya really loved Jin, it should be difficult to forget him. Even more if he has someone next to him. It would remind him of what he lost, wouldn't it? :-/ Or maybe it would make him forget easier. It depends on the person, but I think Kame would be the first option :-?

And you made Jin look like a total jerk >.< You tried to mend things saying that he still loves him, but it didn't really work out :P My poor Jin T_T *sob

[fighter_of_moon]

de ce m-ai bate? *puppy eyes*

and you love the wrong scenes, Rorua!!! lol since I'm sometimes a S, I can say that I adore making my characters suffer xDDDDD

No, definitely Jin won't be Cupid!! *God forbids lol* And, dear love, you want to many things in an one-shot (it's already 9 pages long O.O!)
And, Kazuya really loved Jin but when you truly want to forget and move on, no matter how great the love, you could love another person. I think in this case you should know better, right? ;;) And Kame is constantly remembering Jin, let alone the moments spent together; he just want to ignore them and we can tell that Kame can be this too if he wants, ne? :D

And I didn't make Jin look like a jerk *shakes head* he was lol! And I didn't insist more on Jin's behavior because it's Kokame, but maybe in part 3...idk XD

[fighter_of_moon]

si am uitat sa-ti zic

Craciun Fericit!! <3

sau Craciun Jincit? XDDD nu interpreta ultimul cuvant te rog, interpretez eu prea multe XDDD

[aroruae]

Ma bucur =)))))

[wintersdancer]

BUuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh poor Koki D: D: D: D: *pats him*

[fighter_of_moon]

indeed T_T poor him, but better days await for him XDD
thanks for reading *hugs*

Merry Christmas *maaaany huuugies*
Craciun Fericit XD

[wintersdancer]

Mersi mul draga :D Craciun fericit si tie ^_^

>And Jin was an asshole here...can I say it? Ops...I said it *hides*

[fighter_of_moon]

XDDD I know he was an asshole, but I think I can understand him. When you love someone and feel that someone hurt you, you want to hurt back just to show you care and it hurts you too.
But more of this, I'll try to say in the third part which I intend to allocate to Jin :D

And don't worry, we love the jerk Jin XDD

KATTUN XMAS <3

[fazlyn_n]

I want to read this coz I've been missing Kokame...
But since it angst, can I wait for the other part or I'll get tormented endlessly...

But I promise to drop you a comment in every part ne~~~
Till then...love ya...xoxo

[fighter_of_moon]

I laughed when I read your comment XDD
As you wish, my dear; this one-shot will still be here XDD I'm glad that you want to read it <33 I hope you'll like till the end, I hope to make it good :D

Love ya too and Merry Christmas *hugggggs*

[fazlyn_n]

Finally back to claim my spot

[tokoyam1]

huuuaa,,,
i hate part and part...@@
that's make me impatient...

please update sooon..
i reaaly wanna read this...
owwh..[poor koki...hiksss...

[fighter_of_moon]

Sorry about the part thing *bows head/puppy eyes* it's just that I don't want write multi-chaptered stories neither 1-2 pages long stories T_T and they end up like the one above...

But I'll promise to update as soon as I can xDD I've already started writing the 2nd part, so I should be able to finish it quickly as new ideas keep flowing inside my head XD

Thanks for reading *huggies*

Merry Christmaaas~

[tokoyam1]

ehehehhehe..
i'm impatient person...
so please forgive me about my selfish,kay...

i will waiting..
please quickly...^^v

[fighter_of_moon]

it's okay xD I can understand perfectly impatience, as I'm the same occasionally xP

*HUGS*