One more day in Paradise - part one

[fighter_of_moon]

He knew that he was just a mere replacement. He knew he wasn’t the one who was truly needed, yet he couldn’t stop this. He loved him with all his heart and he would do anything for him…even selling his soul and body to him.

Koki stifled a yawn before raising his head a little. The dimmed light of the bedroom made him think he was alone, but he

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[aroruae]

Oh, Doamne, ce te-as bate =)))

I have to say that I truly hate Kokame xD Maybe others would pity Koki but I just felt annoyed by him. But I loved the last scene where he saw Kame and Jin *evil grin* What? I really don't like the guy >.<

Yeah, yeah, I know this isn't Akame. Then Jin will be the Cupid? =)) Now this would be funny, but appropriate since you said that Jin still loves Kame. You should have said how much time had passed for Kame to forget Jin and fall in love with Koki. Or you did? If Kazuya really loved Jin, it should be difficult to forget him. Even more if he has someone next to him. It would remind him of what he lost, wouldn't it? :-/ Or maybe it would make him forget easier. It depends on the person, but I think Kame would be the first option :-?

And you made Jin look like a total jerk >.< You tried to mend things saying that he still loves him, but it didn't really work out :P My poor Jin T_T *sob*

And why did you want me to read this when I already read it once when you were writing it? /:) I stopped exactly at this part too.

Apropo, l-ai facut pe Kame o adevarata fetita indragostit si suferinda xD

[fighter_of_moon]

de ce m-ai bate? *puppy eyes*

and you love the wrong scenes, Rorua!!! lol since I'm sometimes a S, I can say that I adore making my characters suffer xDDDDD

No, definitely Jin won't be Cupid!! *God forbids lol* And, dear love, you want to many things in an one-shot (it's already 9 pages long O.O!)
And, Kazuya really loved Jin but when you truly want to forget and move on, no matter how great the love, you could love another person. I think in this case you should know better, right? ;;) And Kame is constantly remembering Jin, let alone the moments spent together; he just want to ignore them and we can tell that Kame can be this too if he wants, ne? :D

And I didn't make Jin look like a jerk *shakes head* he was lol! And I didn't insist more on Jin's behavior because it's Kokame, but maybe in part 3...idk XD
Leave alone your poor Jin; I bet he isn't XP

And when did you read it?? I just finished writing it two days ago XDD And believe, what you read was 2 pages long, this is nine lol
Oh, and I assume you skipped lots of parts, right? *sigh* I hate this thing about you xD

Si da, stiu l-am facut pe Kame ca o fetita, I still can't believe it >///< I'm such a bad fan...

[fighter_of_moon]

si am uitat sa-ti zic

Craciun Fericit!! <3

sau Craciun Jincit? XDDD nu interpreta ultimul cuvant te rog, interpretez eu prea multe XDDD

[aroruae]

Ma bucur =)))))