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[fifteen_half]

Title: Spiders
Characters: Hankyung, Eeteuk
Genre: err... it's dark?
Rating: R
Summary: In which saying 'sorry' won't ever be enough.

Comments

[amine87]

OHMYGOD *_____________________*

I'm speechless.....
a prank of too much prank........

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[fifteen_half]

Wow! You're fast!

True, though. It was a cruel, cruel prank.

Thanks for reading!XD

[svtstarlight]

Awwwwwwwwww *wibbles* So sad....so mean! They didn't know it would do that to him but still..... *is so sad* That's just heartbreaking. And there isn't any way to fix it any more. :( :(

(that said, it was really...strange and surreal. And of course you know I like that sort of thing LOL <3)

[fifteen_half]

I, actually, was thinking about your Survivor's Guilt Hannie while I was writing the middle part. Hahaha! The thought that Hannie could go mad from his extreme guilt and pain and everything got stuck and viola! It went that way from the middle.

I'm glad you liked it!! And thank you for reading!<3

[ladyrevania]

Wow, this story is quite unusual. A little bit odd and scary. I like it. Are you going to write next part?

[fifteen_half]

I was going for odd and scary so I'm glad you thought that! And I'm glad you liked it, too!

Hmm... A next part? Probably not. I usually ruin things when I write a sequel. Haha! But, thank you so much for reading!<3

[miracleshining]

This so wonderfull dark and vicious with such sad undertones. I really enjoy when I read something different like this and I really liked how you portrayed Hankyung. Damgaged, afraid and hidden inside of himself. Especially the killing of the spider, seemed to real to do in his situation.

I felt for Eeteuk and his mistake, along with the others. You never know what will push someone into madness, ne? This fic reminds me an old movie I watched called "Terror Train" which ran in the same vein.

Great job, amazing use of mood and scene. Keep it up! (This makes me want to start on my other big fic I've had in my head, which is a lot darker than previous stuff!)

[fifteen_half]

I love reading these kinds of stories, too, so that's probably the reason why I made one. That said, write your other fic soon!!!XD

Hankyung's the character I love to write, so I'm glad I portrayed him well enough! And the spider, at first it wasn't supposed to mean anything, but then the story wrote itself and there. Haha!

True, you won't know what would push someone over the edge; that's a pretty scary thought sometimes.XD

Thank you so much for reading!!! I'm really glad you liked this!

[runawayxxlovee]

Oh, I was so freaked out about the first part. I'm terrified of spiders. I almost stopped reading but I'm glad I didn't because this was so beautifully written. Like the way you connected everything and ACK. I really liked this.

{He watches them continue on, without as much as a glance at him. He watches them and he feels and he hurts and he wants and needs to be with them.

He should be with them. Right?}

You probably don't know me very well but I usually only quote one thing because it's hard for me to go back and look for things but there were so many parts that were just like "Wow." That part *points* really got me. And the apologizing... Sometimes, 'sorry' just doesn't change anything. I did say I loved this right? Yes? ♥

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The spider wasn't supposed to mean anything at first, but then the story wrote itself and there!XD I'm glad it worked out fine. And I'm glad you continued to read it even when you hate spiders!

True, sometimes, just saying sorry isn't enough. In this case, it won't be able to fix anything at all, which is kinda sad for all of them.

Haha! Thanks! It's so hard for me to describe things so you quoting lines makes me really happy! Again, thank you! I'm glad you loved it!!<3

[runawayxxlovee]

suidgksjkg.

I know what you mean.

And you know, I went back to look for this and it took me forever to find it.

Thing is, I'm creathing this huge pimp list for fics. and I wanted this to be on there. ♥ and I just wanted you to know.

[fifteen_half]

( I think ) I'm on a sabbatical from suju so I haven't browsed through miracle ( and LJ ) for like, the longest time, but I just have to say THANK YOU and that I am touched and honored that this is included in your list.<3 [I would've written this on your page but I'm shy like that.:)] I am honestly and sincerely happy you still remembered this.<3

Again, thank you!