Syntax: why it matters

[fidelioscabinet]

Being the involuntary host of some invasive microscopic life forms these past few days, all I've done has been sneeze, cough, wheeze, and idly browse the internets for amusement

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[la_marquise_de_]

I hope you feel better soon.
And yes, that line conjures up a *very* strange image indeed.

[fidelioscabinet]

Thanks! It's a really glorious cold; I suspect I picked it up at the small child's birthday party I attended last Sunday.

[starcat_jewel]

Yes, the simple addition of a comma there would have removed a lot of mental anguish on the part of the readers.

[smills47]

Can you expand upon the blood sausage? enquiring minds want to know! (Tangentially, at our local [very good, German-style] butcher's, they make two kinds, regular and sweet.)

And I hope you feel better soon.