SPN FIC - The Kindness of Strangers

Apr 24, 2012 11:34

A motel, out in the middle of nowhere. Two sick travelers, and someone who understands the value of "the benefit of the doubt."

CHARACTERS:  Dean, Sam, OFC
GENRE:  Gen (Outsider POV)
RATING:  PG
SPOILERS:  None
LENGTH:  1284 words

"Welcome back!" she says with the lilt in her voice Annabeth taught her to use, the one that makes her sound like a ( Read more... )

dean, sam, season 7, outsider pov

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trystan830 April 24 2012, 15:52:31 UTC
the boys need more people like this in their lives. lovely little fic. =)

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ficwriter1966 April 24 2012, 15:55:49 UTC
They definitely do!

Glad you enjoyed it. :)

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trystan830 April 24 2012, 16:00:01 UTC
i enjoy all of your fics. =D

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ficwriter1966 April 24 2012, 16:17:55 UTC
That's very sweet of you to say - thank you. :)

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ramblin_rosie April 24 2012, 15:59:58 UTC
♥ It's good that she *doesn't* remember, but yay for someone being willing to give poor sniffly Dean the benefit of the doubt!

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ficwriter1966 April 24 2012, 16:17:03 UTC
Just figured it was Dean, did you? *g*

Glad you enjoyed it! And yes, somebody needs to give those poor boys a break now and then. And the good tissues.

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khek April 24 2012, 16:03:57 UTC
Aww.

I love Audrey! Someone who knows when a little bit of mothering is needed.

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ficwriter1966 April 24 2012, 16:17:36 UTC
She brings soup! All motels need that. :)

Glad you enjoyed it!

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phebemarie April 24 2012, 16:23:47 UTC
This is terrific, but I feel like Audrey. Have I read another story of yours with her in it or does it just feel like I have? ;)

I'm a sucker for students who get the sniffles, so I definitely appreciate Audrey's empathy to the boys.

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ficwriter1966 April 24 2012, 17:42:58 UTC
Thank you! No, Audrey's never turned up before, although I've done an OC or two that was somewhat similar.

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harrigan April 24 2012, 16:27:25 UTC
I love Outsider POV like this!

And I enjoyed that you didn't leave obvious clues about who it was. No 'pale beneath his freckles' or hints about how tall he would have been if not slumped over with fatigue and illness...

(My first guess was Sam who'd been Robo!Sam the first time around, so he doesn't recognize her even though she thinks she recognizes him. But either works!)

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ficwriter1966 April 24 2012, 17:44:48 UTC
Glad you liked it!

There's one bit ("I've been driving...") that would lead you to think it's Dean, but not for sure. I was going to make it more definite at first, then thought, no, leave it open, and we'll see what people end up assuming.

The backstory, though, is that she saw the news reports about their doppelgangers shooting up that diner a few months back.

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roseficke April 25 2012, 04:20:18 UTC
Wow, in that case, I'm glad she didn't recognize him. Otherwise it would have been "no soup for you"! lol

BTW, I figure it was Dean, too. :)

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