A motel, out in the middle of nowhere. Two sick travelers, and someone who understands the value of "the benefit of the doubt."
CHARACTERS: Dean, Sam, OFC
GENRE: Gen (Outsider POV)
RATING: PG
SPOILERS: None
LENGTH: 1284 words
"Welcome back!" she says with the lilt in her voice Annabeth taught her to use, the one that makes her sound like a
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Glad you enjoyed it. :)
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Glad you enjoyed it! And yes, somebody needs to give those poor boys a break now and then. And the good tissues.
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I love Audrey! Someone who knows when a little bit of mothering is needed.
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Glad you enjoyed it!
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I'm a sucker for students who get the sniffles, so I definitely appreciate Audrey's empathy to the boys.
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And I enjoyed that you didn't leave obvious clues about who it was. No 'pale beneath his freckles' or hints about how tall he would have been if not slumped over with fatigue and illness...
(My first guess was Sam who'd been Robo!Sam the first time around, so he doesn't recognize her even though she thinks she recognizes him. But either works!)
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There's one bit ("I've been driving...") that would lead you to think it's Dean, but not for sure. I was going to make it more definite at first, then thought, no, leave it open, and we'll see what people end up assuming.
The backstory, though, is that she saw the news reports about their doppelgangers shooting up that diner a few months back.
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BTW, I figure it was Dean, too. :)
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