SPN FIC - Cravings

[ficwriter1966]

Hooo-eee, it's a double-header.  And it's only 2:00.  Here's the first one...

Characters:  the YED, John, Mary, wee!Dean, a couple of wee!demons, and the Sammy-bump
Rating:  PG, because it's creepy
Pairings:  just some Mom-and-Dad-significant glances
Length:  2248 words
Kleenex rating: gonna say 0
Spoilers:  none

Ah, yes.  His brother.  His very special

Comments

[emmacmf]

Woooooooooah. Super sweet, with a side helping of OMFG!Creepy.

You got the YED absolutely spot on perfect.

[ficwriter1966]

Thanks, Em!

[ficwriter1966]

Thanks! Glad you liked it.

[saberivojo]

Damn -- Creepy factor is way up there. Ole YED does that to me.

I have to admit wet, and a little grumpy John. So perfect. I like the YED and his kids. Do not underestimate John boys and girls.

Great job!!

[ficwriter1966]

Had to throw some grumpy-in-wet-underwear John in there. Just for set dressing. :)

This story took a long time to settle down. Couldn't decide whether to tell it from Mary's POV, or the demon's, or... Finally settled on "go for the creepy."

Glad you liked it!

[saberivojo]

The POV makes all the difference in the overall creepy factor. Good choice.

[ella_menno]

OooooooooOOOOOOOOoooooooooh. That? Was creeptastic.

And now I kind of want to hit the YED upside his head with a shoe. (Erm. More than I usually do, I mean.)

[ficwriter1966]

Sneaky SOB, isn't he?! Hanging around in the hallway.

Betcha do a little looking around if you have to get up in the night tonight... *g*

[apieceofcake]

Sweet & creepy! Thank you :-)

[ficwriter1966]

You're welcome! Glad you liked it.