Comments | ficwriter1966: SPN FIC - Hopely

ficwriter1966

SPN FIC - Hopely - Faye, 1991

Oct 23, 2009 11:50

Second entry in my little small-town experiment that began here, with Eddie the thrift shop owner. Outsider POVs, a collection of portraits of the residents of a small town that John brings the boys to three times: 1984, 1991, and 1998. Every seven years, because there's something going on and he's determined to ... you know. Kill some evil sons ( Read more... )

wee!sam, wee!dean, hopely

Comments 37

pinkphoenix1985 October 23 2009, 16:15:40 UTC

oh this is so great! Faye sounds so nice yet she's tired and dying to just escape for a couple of hours with her boyfriend...

Dean babysitting another child is so aww

ficwriter1966 October 23 2009, 20:09:25 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. More to come over the weekend. :)

debbiel66 October 23 2009, 16:29:18 UTC

This was so interesting... I don't think I've ever used "interesting" in fanfic feedback before, but this really was. Your POV was very believable and I like how you left most of it to the reader to fill in the blanks.

Love the image of Sammy getting out his cars for the baby.

ficwriter1966 October 23 2009, 20:11:19 UTC

I'll be filling in a little bit more as time goes on - in this first round, I'm focusing on setting up the characters so you guys have a sense of who they are. Glad you enjoyed this one!

And yes, Sammy playing Matchbox cars with the baby is luv. :)

seesmooshrun October 23 2009, 17:25:11 UTC

Now THAT is something I've never read before. And you *know* John isn't due back that night; I'm still smiling at the fit he'd pitch if he came home and found the boys babysitting a civilian's kid. Now I'm wondering if Dean taught Sammy to feed Charlie and change his diaper. Especially the diaper.

ficwriter1966 October 23 2009, 20:13:19 UTC

Dean is ever the entrepreneur - can't pass up the chance to make a few bucks, especially when it involves something he knows how to do. Now he's just got to hope Sam doesn't rat him out. :)

Glad you enjoyed it!

irismay42 October 23 2009, 17:41:21 UTC

Love these outside POV stories! I'm sure having a line of salt across your doorway would seem a little odd to a "civilian", and of course Dean would seem like a whole mess of contradictions to anyone who didn't really know him!

ficwriter1966 October 23 2009, 20:15:18 UTC

I'm glad you're enjoying them! Picking out possible new characters is a great way to fill up some time - I've got a couple more lined up, who might appear over the weekend.

You do kind of wonder how John explained those salt lines. :)

fredsmith518 October 23 2009, 17:59:21 UTC

like the detail, her remembering his name at the end

ficwriter1966 October 23 2009, 20:15:50 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)