THE WORLD DEVOURED 4/4 (the bad romance series)

[fictionfreak15]

THE WORLD DEVOURED 4/4
Beta: gwencarmichael

A/n Thanks so much to everyone who's made it this far.  I've loved hearing your thoughts and feedback <3  I think you'll like this cuz we meet the rest of Tommy's crew and Adam and Tommy are reunited! *squee!* ;)  Love you guys!

Comments

[jonne_bunny]

-sniffles- That was so good! You ended this part perfectly! Really this story took my heart and sent it on a roller coaster. Thank you for sharing. Cant wait for the next series!

[fictionfreak15]

Thank you Doll! I've been smiling all morning cuz I really love this chapter. Such a relief, no? The next part's called "Here Within My Heart" - from yet another Smashing Pumpkins song, and there is plenty of sweetness in it.

Can't wait to share it! Thank you so much for reading, hon. *hugs* :):):):):):):)

[sparklesdani]

*sniffles* Okay, I'm going to try to write this comment through my tears. *tries to compose self* Okay, first off, Tommy's friends are the best people ever. I love Monte and Kris and Connie and how you wrote them as "We love you, Adam, simply because Tommy loves you." They didn't judge and they were just there for Adam and Tommy. And Kris is the awesomest guy ever for offering Adam a place to stay. And I love Connie saying how cute and adorable Adam is.

But the reunion. Oh my god, okay, I'm gonna need a minute. *opens another box of kleenex* That was such a beautiful scene. I mean, them crying together and then the kiss. I don't even have words for how that made feel. I loved this and I love you, baby. Hugs, Dani <333333

[fictionfreak15]

*wipes your tears* Awwww! I hope they're happy tears! I know! I couldn't wait to show you guys this part. It's like you're feeling the relief I wrote in for Adam!

Now that Adam is around REAL people aka Tommy's crew, he's gonna have to hear how adorable he is from now on when he was only hearing the ghostly voices of negativity from others of his past. It's up to him which one he believes.

Didn't think so much kleenex would be needed LOL! I've seen warnings like that before, but never wanted to presume, you know? :) Thank you for reading bb! I love you soooooo much! And thank you for commenting. <33333333

[cunningdeb]

Oh sweetie, that was wonderful. I'm so happy Adam has a 'family' that loves him now for who he is. The reunion was bittersweet but more sweet then bitter. I can't wait for you to post the next part.

Thinking of you
Hugs
Deb <33

[fictionfreak15]

Thank you, Deb!!!! *clapping* I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reading this. I really loved this part :)Everything's gonna be ok with our boy, and I'll post again soon!

You keep, like a really big smile on my face and if I could make it any bigger I would :D:D:D *hugs*

See ya! <333333

[wizardesslyn]

OMG....so sweet and sad!

[fictionfreak15]

Hi!!!!!! Thank you for reading it!!! Hang in there :)
<3333

[robin1961]

OMG i LOVE YOU LOL sweetie that was so sweet and touching and beautiful ....how are you not writing novels ? the emotion you write with is just spellbinding I cannot wait for this to continue. You dare to write emotions that are hard to read but trully take you inside the characters. MUUUAAAHH

[fictionfreak15]

*runs up and hugs* Roooobiiiin!!! LOL Novels! I'm long winded enough, I'm sure :D If I could make a living off LJ, believe me I'd be the happiest freak in the world!!

I'm glad you were able to feel all the intended emotions, and I hope this chap made you feel happy too, cuz it's one of my favorite in the series. You ain't seen nothing yet tho!

Thanks for reading, Babe. I love you soooo much! XOXOXOXOXO