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THE WORLD DEVOURED 3/4 (the bad romance series)

Jan 14, 2011 20:10

Title: The World Devoured
Author: fictionfreak15
Beta: gwencarmichael
Series: The Bad Romance
Warnings: language, angst
Pairing: Adam/Tommy
Disclaimer: I don't own 'em. This did not happen. I only write fiction.
Summary: After surviving a vicious attack, Adam and Tommy recover in the hospital. Adam misses Tommy, and feels like he'll never be happy again until he ( Read more... )

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Comments 14

sparklesdani January 15 2011, 01:42:14 UTC

OH HELL NO! HELL NOOOOO!!!!! NEIL, YOU DID NOT JUST SEE THAT AND LEAVE? SERIOUSLY!?! OKAY, ME AND MONTE ARE GOING TO TEAM UP AND TEACH THESE ASSHOLES A LESSON THEY AIN'T NEVER GONNA FORGET!!!! Sorry, I'm just so....GRR...about this, you know? :)

Also, I cried the whole first part of this chap. But they were happy tears 'cause Monte was being so nice to him. But if Adam starts that self doubting shit again, I'mma slap him upside the head. I can understand the self doubt, but they like you Adam, accept it. :)

I came, I flailed, I issued death threats. Mission accomplished. LOL! Love this 'verse so much, as if you didn't know. Love you, babe, and I look forward to the last chap. Hugs, dani <3333333

fictionfreak15 January 15 2011, 02:48:59 UTC

Epic Comment! I'm getting high off of your emotional words, babe. Yes! That's exactly what I wanted! The outrage! The confusion! The melting over Monte. YOU ARE WONDERFUL!!!!

It'll take time, honey. It's hard to go your whole life thinking you're not worth shit and then believe it when someone tells you that you're cool. He has fallbacks, but he'll get there, don't worry.

Yes, wouldn't expect anything else! I might be wrong, but this should be the last time Neil pisses you off. Thank you for coming back, Bestie. I love you! *glomps*

sparklesdani January 15 2011, 03:14:29 UTC

EEEEEEE!!!!!!!! YOU ARE WONDERFUL TOO, BB, AFTER ALL YOU CAME UP WITH THIS AWESOME FIC!!!!!! :D

Yeah, I know it'll take time and work for him to accept the fact that people actually like him. But I still feel like I should shake him and make him understand that he is a great person and people love him :)

I'm glad to hear about Neil 'cause otherwise I might have to invest in a punching bag. ;P I love you sooooooo much, wifey! *glomps back* <3333333

fictionfreak15 January 15 2011, 05:04:20 UTC

Ok, go ahead and shake him, but be sure to hold him close after. Like that would be too difficult ;)
Thanks again, bb!

cunningdeb January 15 2011, 04:28:49 UTC

Well, I'm not feeling up to being as elequent as danigirl and ditzydmt right now but that was a tough chapter but a good one. I was also shocked by Neil's actions but I'm glad Monte is there and I hope when Adam is released, he goes home with the big guy and Tommy. I think they'll be the family Adam deserves.

Hugs
Deb <333

fictionfreak15 January 15 2011, 05:01:32 UTC

Hey Deb! It's ok, I just love talking regardless. I'm sorry if I put you in funk. It'll get better. Congrats for making it this far. There shouldn't be any more tough ones - not too bad - after this one. :)

Thank you so much for giving it a chance. I know it's heavy, but thank you! <33333333333

cunningdeb January 15 2011, 16:12:24 UTC

DOn't worry sweetie, you didn't put me in a funk ~ was already there. That's what happens when you're shovelling yourself out of a blizzard, trudging around on uneven ground with a bad knee and have 14 kids going insane at work. Had been yawning since 5:30pm.

Hugs and if I don't get a chance to talk to you again in the next few days, have a great weekend

Deb <333

PS just yawned again and its 11:12am! LOL

fictionfreak15 January 15 2011, 16:33:07 UTC

*sympathetic hug* I can't imagine, Lady. We dodged a bullet here in Ohio and though I've had to shovel a few times this week, I can't complain.

Hopefully you've read some other fics that made you feel better! :):):):) Thanks again! And talk to you later!
<33 Caris

robin1961 January 15 2011, 09:17:25 UTC

So happy adam got to meet Monte ... so sad that this was the reason why ...the thought of adam lying in that bed so alone is just heartbreaking. Loved that adam liked monte without judging his appearenceg such a lesson we all need to learn, also loved montes anger with happened to tommy .... such an honest emotion we would all have if someone we loved was abused in such a way. Girl you have a gift with writing emotions...can't wait for the rest of this ♥♥

fictionfreak15 January 15 2011, 12:35:08 UTC

Thank you so much Robin!! Monte alwasy struck me as the sweetest guy, and because he and Adam have been friends for so long, I knew they should meet first. I'm glad you liked that Monte lost it a little. You're right, anyone would, but it's going to be ok.

Thank you for reading, Robin and for your encouraging comments as always *big huggles* <3333

jonne_bunny January 15 2011, 14:25:47 UTC

I love the way you play Monte. Please feel free to take him in the RP anytime! Poor Neil. He was the real wimp in the end. Your doing great with the story. Looking forward to the next part!

fictionfreak15 January 15 2011, 16:27:31 UTC

lol, Babe, you're the first one to actually sympathize with Neil! Haha! It'll all be ok in the end tho, so I'm glad you've been able to stick around! Thank you for reading! *hugs*

caroline_cuna January 16 2011, 02:28:44 UTC

Hey, Caris, your stories are cathartic. As much as I need some mush and humor from time to time, I also need a little dose of this. Thanks for providing the much needed variety. :) CC

fictionfreak15 January 16 2011, 02:46:21 UTC

I know exactly what you mean.;) For me, I'm up for almost anything that sounds good to me, but every time I come across the dark stuff, I gotta check it out.

Thank you so much for coming back here, Caroline! *hugs*:) Hope to have the next part real soon. I think you'll like it.
-Caris