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The Long Awaited Inevitable

May 28, 2008 03:51

Title: The Long Awaited Inevitable
Fandom: Twilight
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating/Warnings: PG
Word Count: 668
Author's Note: Alice's pov - nothing particularly unique. I just had to get some Twilight out; this is actually my very first fanfic for this fandom. Also, endless thanks to shanaeplusb2 for helping me come up with a title - it only took us ( Read more... )

fanfic, alice/jasper, drabble, twilight

Comments 38

hmd67 May 30 2008, 01:06:47 UTC

This is the first fanfic I've read in a loooong time and it is the first Twilight fanfic I've ever read and I'm glad I did.

It was like a warm cup of cappuccino in a cold, rainy day. That's how much I liked it. Short and sweet.

"A few, I knew."

My favorite part. Alice's power is so complex, it is such a difficult thing to grasp... I just think you did a wonderful job with it. *hugs*

fantasium May 31 2008, 14:48:34 UTC

*grins* Thank you, my darling Harald. Those words mean so much, especially coming from you. *hugs back*

suicidalxchaos May 31 2008, 11:34:23 UTC

Aw, adorable!

fantasium May 31 2008, 14:48:54 UTC

Thank you! :D

caccasandra June 1 2008, 18:14:15 UTC

Wow this was great!
very beautiful written :D

fantasium June 1 2008, 18:20:38 UTC

:D Tack så mycket, kära du!

loidor November 27 2009, 20:50:03 UTC

Bloody brilliant. I'll read some more, and perhaps I get hooked on this fanfic thingy, although writing my own fic already has its sweet spot. It's all about the "is this possible" question.

fantasium November 28 2009, 00:28:44 UTC

Yeah... >.> You should keep away from the R rated stuff, though, or you might just lose all the respect you've ever (hopefully) had for me. Ahem.

Very glad that you like this, though. Yes, I'm very particular about fanfic. It has to fit, be possible and people have to be in character, otherwise I can't stand it. Although, there is a fanfictional term known as "alternate universe", where the author picks up the characters and puts them down in a completely different setting or in different circumstances, and still manages to keep the essence of the person right. That impresses me.

loidor November 28 2009, 00:36:41 UTC

You don't worry about your impression, darling. I ain't never gonna lose nuffin for you, ya know.

Hmm, I guess... This is hard to admit, but I guess I've read those kinds of fanfics. Or... They're semi-official, so I guess they go as fics. Or rather comics, since that's what they are. But I've done my fair deal of Superman/Batman. Does that count?

fantasium November 28 2009, 01:00:29 UTC

*snorts* Yes, that sure counts. It's known as a "crossover", which you probably know already. You know, I've been tempted to write a humorous Twilight/Grey's Anatomy crossover. Like, what if the Cullens relocated to Seattle in a few years' time (it makes sense, Bella could go with them and still be close to Charlie) and Carlisle started working at Seattle Grace Hospital? I don't know how much you know about Grey's, but I could just see Carlisle pondering over the ridiculousness of his new coworkers. The hot male doctors are known as McDreamy and McSteamy respectively... Carlisle would make a good McFang ( ... )

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