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The Long Awaited Inevitable

May 28, 2008 03:51

Title: The Long Awaited Inevitable
Fandom: Twilight
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating/Warnings: PG
Word Count: 668
Author's Note: Alice's pov - nothing particularly unique. I just had to get some Twilight out; this is actually my very first fanfic for this fandom. Also, endless thanks to shanaeplusb2 for helping me come up with a title - it only took us ( Read more... )

fanfic, alice/jasper, drabble, twilight

Comments 38

alana23 May 28 2008, 10:32:48 UTC

Oh, Anna! This is such a wonderful little drabble. I'd actually forgotten how much I enjoyed your writing, seeing as it's been quite awhile since V&V was updated. /not-so-subtle reminder >.>

Anyway, back to the awesomeness of this drabble, you captured Alice's POV so darn well. The kind of language that you used made it downright feel like it was way back in those times, you know? Just, wow, A-W-E-S-O-M-E.

This is nowhere as worthy as a SPEW review, but just thought I'd let you know how much I appreciated the drabble. <3

fantasium May 28 2008, 13:09:30 UTC

*grins* Thank you, thank you, Preethi! And, >.>, yes, I know that V&V has been a little neglected as of late, but I promise, I've got quite a bit of the next chapter already written, and my Muse is happy and willing. :D

haryan May 28 2008, 12:56:17 UTC

Awwwww!
that was cute

fantasium May 28 2008, 13:09:47 UTC

Thank you! :D

msqu May 28 2008, 13:02:15 UTC

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! Anna! This is just absolutely the perfect drabbled telling of this moment! I'm just grinning in an idiotic sort of way over it. The way he took her hand! The way she found him taller than she imagined. -lovely sigh- I just adore this, and you. ♥

fantasium May 28 2008, 13:10:34 UTC

*giggles and grins* I adore you, too. And, *happy sigh*, they're just suck a lovely, lovely pairing. ♥

msqu May 28 2008, 23:08:20 UTC

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Suck a lovely pairing?

Is that vampire lingo?

/explanation for most recent outburst of giggles

fantasium May 28 2008, 23:10:24 UTC

Freudian slip. Kind of. >.>

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andacus May 28 2008, 14:09:24 UTC

Lovely. Great imagery and word use. Such a nice picture you've painted here.

fantasium May 28 2008, 17:12:21 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm very glad that you like it. =)

dory_the_fishie May 28 2008, 15:28:57 UTC

Ah! Anna, I love this so much. I love Jasper/Alice, and you wrote this moment perfectly.

Better than Stephenie Meyer could have.

fantasium May 28 2008, 17:13:12 UTC

*chuckles* Yay, Squishy, I'm so very happy that you like it! *hugs*