FIC--Changing Perceptions--Part Four--Autumn

[fics_by_aj]

Title: Changing Perceptions
Rating: R
Summary: How exactly did James and Lily get together in their seventh year?
Words: 8,760
Betas: queenb23more

Part Three--The Hogwarts Express

Changing Perceptions
A James and Lily Fan-Fiction

Comments

[kentish_queen]

That little snippet at the end, between James and his mum, was lovely. Got me a little teary eyed!

Great job, as always, D! Can't wait for more!

[fics_by_aj]

thanks, honey and I was going for the heartstrings on that part

[lunalovepotter]

You did a wonderful job opening up the world of the Marauders - I found their interactions to be spot-on, and just as I would have imagined them together. The heat between James and Lily is of course fantastic (you are the queen after all), and I especially love the touching moment between James and his mother at the end.

Beautiful work. :)

[fics_by_aj]

thanks, honey...even though James is a very independant young man, he still loves his mama...

[rose_starr]

Seriously LOVE this chapter!!!

And James is just hot! Period!!

[fics_by_aj]

thanks, m'dear...he'll be getting a lot hotter in the next chapter..

[white_tulips]

Baaaah stop, James's relationship with his mom has me melting into a puddle of goo. I love how your James doesn't have him worrying so much about how other people would interpret his feelings--like how he's able to love his mother so openly and how he didn't shrug Sirius off when he found out that his dad died.

On another note, damn Lily! Nicely done! I'm talking about the Unbreakable Vow, of course. Great touch, by the way. Really clever and binding.

Hm I don't quite know what else to say, so I'll just click ahead to the next chapter...