Comments | ficnerd198: Better to Have Loved and Lost

ficnerd198

Better to Have Loved and Lost

Jul 26, 2011 00:10

Title: Better to Have Loved and Lost Pairings: Jared/Jensen Rating: R Warnings: Extreme disgusting schmoop, because apparently I'm on a roll today. Word Count: 4,036 Summary: When Jared was five his mama used to tuck him into bed and tell him stories about how a prince met his princess and they fell in love and lived happily ever after. Let's just ( Read more... )

rating: r, j2, schmoop, bottom!jared, kid!fic, jensen and jared's epic love

Comments 25

write_in_red July 27 2011, 13:39:09 UTC

That was so good!

I loved the way his mom didn't let their dad leaving turn her into a bitter person, and that she could still appreciate love enough to be able to teach her children about it.

I love the way he met Jensen, and the little glimpse into their future lives.

It was a great feel good fic. :)

ficnerd198 July 30 2011, 03:49:04 UTC

First off I want to apologize for replying late. LJ being down was worse in my area than in some others and I didn't have more than 45 minutes or so and I spent that time trying to get onto the blindfold round post to get my fill in :/

Anyways moving on ;D :

Wow, thank you! :3 I really wanted his mom to be a strong and life loving person for him to grow off of because even though her death hit him in a bad place, I think that it also made Jared into a wiser and better person because of the realization that things don't last forever, and that what they do have is precious while it lasts.

I also have this soft spot for clichés and this was too good a chance to play out my fantasy to pass up so I'm glad that the way they met wasn't too cheesy :D Thank you for such a nice comment-- I would say it made my day, but since it's night I guess your comment really made my night <3

sandymg July 28 2011, 01:36:49 UTC

Long live schmoop. Especially if it's this lovely!

ficnerd198 July 30 2011, 03:39:10 UTC

Awww, thank you!! *blushes*

skagtrendy1 July 30 2011, 22:24:43 UTC

Beautifully written, hon.

Found myself blinking back tears several times, but I couldn't stop reading.

Really, well done.

Love and hugs,
ST xxx

ficnerd198 July 30 2011, 22:29:26 UTC

Thank you!! I had the same problem when I was writing this; I had to blink back my tears but couldn't stop typing XD *hugs back*

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ficnerd198 July 31 2011, 03:48:24 UTC

Aww, thank you :D

samjsjlove July 31 2011, 13:22:23 UTC

oh my goodness, so sweet! And I totally knew which scene in HIMYM your were referring to. I can't totally talk my way out of a ticket :P

Anyway, this was really cute and I really enjoyed it :)

ficnerd198 August 1 2011, 18:39:11 UTC

Really? lol neither can I ;] Well thanks, you caught me off guard by that. I love/hate that scene because it's so sad but then so heart warming too, ya know? Kind of a big reason why this fic was born in the first place >.> I'm glad you enjoyed it *drools over your icon*