FIC FOR BELTENEBRA

[hyphen_chan]

For: beltenebra
From: myxstorie

Title: What You Don't Know
Pairings/Characters: Jin/Kame, Koki/Kame
Rating: R for violence
Warnings: AU with a slightly supernatural-y, sci-fi-y twist. Includes some violence and character death.
Notes: beltenebra, I sort of went out on a limb here, so I really hope this is to your liking! It's based on Josh Whedon's show, Dollhouse, but you

Comments

[beltenebra]

I would like to being by saying that this fic was in every way, brilliant and I adore it. Really, I loved absolutely every little thing about it. I loved the setting... I knew just enough about Dollhouse to have a fairly good idea of what was going on. ^_^ And can I say, using Kame's drama characters for missions? Completely inspired. Just... gah.

Ok, let's break it down. I love the way you played Kame here. He is a consummate actor and absolutely the perfect person for this role. I adored the bits of flash back to his relationship with Jin (and let me just say that I rarely request Akame b/c I particular about how they are written and you just about blew me away here, so lovely), I love that Kame was the one who cracked and I can totally see it, Jin is just such a magnetic person and Kame loved him and it hurt. I really liked the insinuation that his unresolved anguish over Jin is what is corrupting his programming, the idea that there are some things people just aren't meant to forget. Koichi as the mastermind behind the whole

[myxstorie]

Amy~~ I have no shame in admitting your comment brought tears to my eyes. You mentioned EVERYTHING I hoped you would, and more.

I was so worried that you didn't know enough about Dollhouse to be able to get it at first, but at the same time I didn't want to spell anything out and spoil the ~mystery~ and so on; but Brina was a wonderful hand-holder and assured me it was just fine ♥

I was torn about using Akame as the pairing, because while I know you read them, they're not a favourite - but really, they were the only pairing that fit this well enough for it to work, and I thought you'd forgive me XDD;

I kind of love the idea of Eito and Arashi being opposing gangs, fighting with sparkles and rainbows instead of real weapons XDD Although most of that chunk was totally gratuitous, just for you ♥ Koki was my favourite to write, I think. He's so perfect as Kame's handler, and I was so lucky that you like KoKame so much ♥

Thank you, so much for this comment, it's perfect ;_; I'm also sorry I sort of ignored most of your request when I

[tokeruyouna]

This was extremely interesting and written in a very effective way. I am sort of blown away right now, so please excuse the speechless comment.

[myxstorie]

Thank you so much :D Speechless comments are one of my favourite kind ;)

it's eternal sunshine of the motherfucking mind

[ryogrande]

... but better. O.O

i am speechless. just. speechless.

i owe you a better comment when my mind is done being fucked.

Re: it's eternal sunshine of the motherfucking mind

[myxstorie]

i love you a lot ♥

[zheinpathos]

This is absolutely wonderful and beautiful, but I think I need to read this at least twice more before understand this fully.

*rereads* <3

[myxstorie]

Thank you so much! I hope it wasn't too confusing XD

[yuumei_nata]

I really have no words for this, because this is just so so good and I am blown away. I am amazed at how well you kept this together and tied everything together so well in the end. The mystery of the whole thing and the small hints and just everything worked so well that I'm not even bothered that it has Akame.

And my favourite scene has to be where Kame cuts Jin, just because the change from Jin's view to Kame's, the blending of the two and when Kame (and the reader) realizing what really happened is just so well done that I... I don't even know *___*

There is so much I would like to say but my vocabulary fails me but I am really glad you wrote something like this. I am absolutely floored by this and it has my eternal love ♥

[myxstorie]

Thank you, thank you, thank you. I'm so glad you picked out the changing of viewpoints when Kame's cutting Jin, because that was one of the few scenes I had planned from the very beginning, and one of the ones I enjoyed writing the most.

This comment is amazing, so wonderful, I can't even pick out the best bits because it's ALL so good <3 thank you.