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FIC FOR BELTENEBRA

Mar 22, 2010 17:15

For: beltenebra
From: myxstorie

Title: What You Don't Know
Pairings/Characters: Jin/Kame, Koki/Kame
Rating: R for violence
Warnings: AU with a slightly supernatural-y, sci-fi-y twist. Includes some violence and character death.
Notes: beltenebra, I sort of went out on a limb here, so I really hope this is to your liking! It's based on Josh Whedon's show, Dollhouse, but you ( Read more... )

rated: r, year: 2010, p: kame/koki, p: jin/kame

Comments 18

sashjun March 23 2010, 19:11:19 UTC

I was staring at the blinking cursor not knowing what to write for some time now so ... yeah.

This was very twisted but the way the scenes changed and then intertwined was amazing. Then the scenes with Jin and how it all turned around were great, but I loved the Kousaku bit probably the most. Not because of Ueda (this time) but because of the serenity and kind of foreshadowing and the sharp contrast of Kousaku being so freaking cheerful. I think I appreciate it even more now that the fic is over.

This was interesting in every way!

<3

myxstorie March 31 2010, 20:54:18 UTC

Thank you :D I loved writing Kousaku, he was a lot of fun in the middle of so much angst and confusion xD

imifumei March 24 2010, 15:07:18 UTC

This was seriously amazing. Having recently watched a significant portion of Dollhouse, I have to say how impressed I am that you kept this right in the same vein without just ripping off their storylines.

I loved Jin and Kame's backstory and of course Koki and Junno. Well, I loved all of it. The idea of using Kame's drama characters as his doll personalities was brilliant.

It was just completely fantastic.

Very well done, author-san.

myxstorie March 31 2010, 20:56:15 UTC

Thank you so much, for such a lovely comment and for all your help; I couldn't have done it without you ♥ I was a little worried about, as you say, ripping off their storylines, because I wanted to include bits of the show that I loved the most, the bits that really show just how gritty the Dollhouse is, but I didn't want to just copy it, so it really made my day that you thought that hadn't happened ♥

Thank you ;_;

debrogliewave March 26 2010, 04:36:03 UTC

Ooh Dollhouse! I love the way you handled Kame's different engagements with the drama characters--genius, that. This was great.

myxstorie March 31 2010, 20:56:33 UTC

:D Thank you so much!

encoded_panties March 26 2010, 12:49:30 UTC

... s;dfcskhfjkdsh *______* I have no words. This was amazing and interesting and heartbreaking. Just ♥

myxstorie March 31 2010, 20:56:57 UTC

;___; thank you~~ ♥ for you, too.