FIC FOR IMIFUMEI

Mar 26, 2011 17:21

For: imifumei
From: myxstorie

Title: The Blue Dragon
Pairings/Characters: Ueda/Junno
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Notes: imifumei, I really hope this is to your tastes, because I certainly enjoyed writing it!
Summary: Late one night, a stranger turns up at Ueda's gym.

The Blue Dragon )

year: 2011, p: junno/ueda, rated: g

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imifumei March 26 2011, 17:48:04 UTC
AHH!! Fic for me!! This is so cute and fun but I don't have the time to flail properly right now. I'm so sorry! I will be back this evening with a proper comment, but in the meantime, I LOVE IT! ♥

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imifumei March 27 2011, 05:56:51 UTC
Okay, where to start?

Well first off, I loved the set-up for this, the whole "Ueda isn't expecting anyone but Koki" thing is a tried-and-true rom-com meet-cute (how many hyphenated words do you think I can spout off in one go? ^^) and I really liked seeing it employed here.

I really enjoyed the way you wrote Junno because one of my favorite things about him is that he seems so carefree with his interpersonal relationships, and you got that in right off the bat with the familiarity issue.

I loved that it seemed like you actually know something about boxing because you used the jargon; and not in a "Look, I did some research and can totally use the jargon now" way, which would have been cumbersome, but in a way that flowed with the narrative. I was impressed. (Not that you need me to be or anything, but- well, it was written for me so I don't suppose knowing that I was impressed is a bad thing, y/y ( ... )

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imifumei April 2 2011, 17:29:42 UTC
waaaahhhhhh! myxstorie!! I new it was you! Thank you again. I loved this a lot.
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myxstorie April 2 2011, 17:31:22 UTC
:DDDD I'm so glad you liked it!! Thank you so much for your amazing comment ;A; ♥

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dw9lives March 27 2011, 05:25:17 UTC
This was really cute! I enjoyed it a lot. :)

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starg8fan_liz March 31 2011, 08:41:26 UTC
sweet LOL XD ♥♥♥♥ great fic ^_^

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sashjun April 1 2011, 12:52:01 UTC
I ADORE THAT JUNNO KISSES TAT-CHAN´S KNUCKLES! Just saying :DDDD This was such a sweet read despite the all manly enviroment ;D I loved it

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jtriskell April 2 2011, 10:19:25 UTC

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