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myxstorie Title: The Blue Dragon
Pairings/Characters: Ueda/Junno
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Notes:
imifumei, I really hope this is to your tastes, because I certainly enjoyed writing it!
Summary: Late one night, a stranger turns up at Ueda's gym.
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Well first off, I loved the set-up for this, the whole "Ueda isn't expecting anyone but Koki" thing is a tried-and-true rom-com meet-cute (how many hyphenated words do you think I can spout off in one go? ^^) and I really liked seeing it employed here.
I really enjoyed the way you wrote Junno because one of my favorite things about him is that he seems so carefree with his interpersonal relationships, and you got that in right off the bat with the familiarity issue.
I loved that it seemed like you actually know something about boxing because you used the jargon; and not in a "Look, I did some research and can totally use the jargon now" way, which would have been cumbersome, but in a way that flowed with the narrative. I was impressed. (Not that you need me to be or anything, but- well, it was written for me so I don't suppose knowing that I was impressed is a bad thing, y/y ( ... )
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