FIC FOR BELTENEBRA

[hyphen_chan]

For: beltenebra
From: krysyuy

Title: Change
Pairings/Characters: Ueda/Taguchi, KAT-TUN (splashes of all the combinations of Koki/Maru/Kame)
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None.
Notes: Set in present-day. Also, please ignore the fact that I moved up the Monster Hunter PSP game release date, lol. I got the Only Star magazine quote from here. I really hope you enjoy this

Comments

[kt_kitt]

waaaaaaaa me like it very muchoooooooo *-*

thanks for including TaNaKame lovely trio!!!

[krysyuy]

Thanks for reading and commenting! ♥ Glad you liked it~

[beltenebra]

I loved every word of this fic. The tone is absolutely perfect, thoughtful, sweet, and warm, really just everything I wanted.

I love you.

The thought flitters across his mind like a butterfly’s wings. He blinks.
From the very beginning it's so lovely.

“I’m hungry,” Koki declares out of the blue.

This prompts Kame to add, “I’m thirsty.”

“To catering!” they exclaim together, standing up and slinging their arms around each other.
Eeeee!!! Such a precious mental image. I adored the KoKame cuteness with a side of Nakamaru. Srsly, so cute. :)

Taguchi’s features are sharply defined under the pale light. Ueda’s gaze follows the tips of his bangs, the long line of his nose, the curve of his jaw. It comes to rest on the quiet, content smile teasing the corner of his lips. That smile does things to him, makes him feel whole and unbroken.

He wants more of this, more of it all, more of everything Junno.
0_0 Oh man, this was just Gorgeous.

“Uh-huh.” Kame raises an eyebrow. “Well, he’s moping. Make up with him, will you? Taguchi

[krysyuy]

You have no idea how relieved I am that you enjoyed the fic. This was my first time writing Junno/Ueda and I was particularly paranoid about Ueda. ^.^;; I really tried my absolute best though, so I'm happy I pulled it off.

And I can't tell you how much I adore possessive Ueda. 0_0 guh, so much.
I agree! XD; I have such a thing for possessive characters in fics. =3= lolol

And woo-hoo~! I'm so glad you like mini-golf, lol. It just came to me one day as I was writing my outline. KT mini-golfing is a kind of precious image in my head, so. xDDD Including the side-KoKameMaru happened naturally. 8)v

AND THIS. I may be overly susceptible to Junno jokes but I thought this was just hilarious. XD
I wish I could take credit for that pun, but thanks goes to the power of the Internet. My punning skills are limited to the simple ones ('puttering around', for example), though I find that my sense of humor is as lame as Junno's... =3= Unfortunately, my punning skills aren't as high as his. xD

[...] this is Exactly what I wanted.I'm maybe, sort of

[beltenebra]

Nice to meet you Krys! Thank you again, I really really loved the fic. Your Ueda was totally adorable! I'm Amy by the way.

[sashjun]

THIS!

SO where to start. I need more synonyms for like and love I swear. The way Ueda realizes is so nice and quiet. The firs a bit drunk kiss *___* and hm I LOVE the way Ueda deals with irony, and being all cold and kind of not really vengeful, but . . . just I liked that part of the fic for some reason when at first he is all "so what he deosn't want me", then wanting to take it out on Junno's stuff, but he is still kind of hurting and just, I am lacking vocab tonight.

Oh yeah His voice is a murmur against his neck and Ueda shivers at the vibration, feeling the return of that all too familiar ache.
That is so so pretty.

I like the whole changing dynamic, Koki, Maru and Kame in the background are priceless, especially on the golf court and LOL at the whole Nishikido think, even though the way Ueda protects Junno is just heart-warming. And of course all the puns and word plays, lol.

then this made me bursts into laughter His voice is a murmur against his neck and Ueda shivers at the vibration, feeling the return of that all

[krysyuy]

I LOVE the way Ueda deals with irony, and being all cold and kind of not really vengeful, but . . .
Yes, I loved writing that part. After being rejected, I thought that Ueda would tell himself mentally that he didn't care when he really did and that all would come out subconsciously through his actions (the interview, for example), etc etc. He was kind of lashing out, but not purposefully or in a mean way.

then this made me bursts into laughter 'His voice is a murmur against his neck and Ueda shivers at the vibration, feeling the return of that all too familiar ache.'
Also I'm kinda curious, I think you meant to quote something else here? lol ;)

then just (I don't know I just imagined him saying it really quickly) getting things out
When I wrote it, that's just how I imagined it as well. :) Junno saying it a long rush of words, just wanting to get it all out. 8)

Thanks so much for reading and for your awesome comment~ ♥

[sashjun]

LOL yes that was definitely a copy-pasta fail. Sorry about that. I think it might have been one of the puttering jokes, most likely the first one because I was just omg *___* So I guess the puttering around?

<3 you are welcome, It was a great read.

[reiicharu]

[krysyuy]

-blushes- Thank you! I'm so glad you liked my Taguchi and Ueda because let me tell you, I was super paranoid about writing this pairing and especially Ueda. @.@;;

[...] flopped around like a Magicarp (YES, THE POKEMON ONES OKAY) at the amount of love I had for that.
LOL. Well, I'm happy you like that part - it's one of my faves as well~ ♥ And Magicarp! I'm kinda having flashbacks to my childhood now. lololol I wish I had more time for video games.

Thanks again for reading and taking the time to comment! ♥ It's much appreciated. :D

[black_rose45000]

i'm not particularly a JunDa shipper, but this fic was really beautiful, i love how it's so bittersweet, with more bitterness on Ueda's side and some sweet touches of Kokamemaru for a good balance :) everything seems so well-thought and carefully written in all details, the way you toyed with the rl facts and the fictive parts, to make them blend so well into a story that would make sure to reach people's hearts and leave a mark on them. i think there are few things (if there are any, at all) that i love more in a fic, than that particular aspect .

thank you for this fic~ ♥ will definitely save it to my collection :)

[krysyuy]

Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, bb! -hugs!-

that would make sure to reach people's hearts and leave a mark on them.
-humbled-