FIC: Time (PG13) Logan/Veronica

[herowlness]

TITLE: Time
AUTHOR: Lizzy
CHARACTER/PAIRING: Logan/Veronica, Veronica POV
RATING: PG13, for a few curse words
SPOILERS: Goes AU mid-220, after a certain, particular scene
WORD COUNT: 2227
DISCLAIMER: They're not mine. (sadly) Just borrowing them to attempt to change the final arc of this past week's episode.
SUMMARY: Veronica always seems to run

Comments

[sarah_p]

and to sarah_p for beta help, encouragment, and for (probably) causing my writing to take a turn towards the more cheesy/fluffy.

So I inspire CHEESE now? HAAAAA!!! Fluffy, I'll take. Until you start writing toys, in though, I'm not sure about the cheese factor ;). But, hee, for having any influence on you. I haven't decided whether that's a good thing or a bad thing yet ;).

Reagardless, you know how I feel about this. Of all the 2x20 EPIC LOVE OMG fics I've seen, this is the first one where LOGAN RUNS AFTER HER. And, hi, without all the animosity post-flee, there WOULDN'T be a Kendall incident this morning, and darn it, I'm glad someone finally wrote it this way!

I love the rationality of your Veronica (which, let's face it, is sometimes absent from TV!Veronica). I guess since we didn't really get HER thoughts during THE scene, this is the closest explanation we can get to what was running through her mind :). Her weighing of why she SHOULDN'T be with Logan is so well done, and it makes me able to understand the summer

[herowlness]

So I inspire CHEESE now?
As soon as Kraft starts writing fanfic, I'm sure they'll cite you as their inspiration. :-P

And, hi, without all the animosity post-flee, there WOULDN'T be a Kendall incident this morning, and darn it, I'm glad someone finally wrote it this way!
Your encouragement and gentle prodding helped this fic become a reality, so I'm really happy that you liked how it turned out. And, yes dammit - it DID need to be written! ;-)

I love the rationality of your Veronica (which, let's face it, is sometimes absent from TV!Veronica). I guess since we didn't really get HER thoughts during THE scene, this is the closest explanation we can get to what was running through her mind :). Her weighing of why she SHOULDN'T be with Logan is so well done, and it makes me able to understand the summer break-up, from her POV, much better.I'd like to argue that it's always there - just not necessarily exposited via VMVO. But, yeah, it's good to get into her head sometimes since she doesn't always wear her heart on her sleeve like our

[hildawookie]

I've decided that if RT doesn't resolve the V/L angsty mess he's created by the end of the season, I will be coming back to your fic and choosing to believe that this is what happened on TV, and that RT doesn't exist anymore. poopoo RT! (I lie, I love him, but I'm very displeased with him at the moment)
I'm so glad that someone finally wrote a fic about Logan going after her. I loved the way you handled it too. You didn't throw them together, and you stayed true to Veronica needing time to figure stuff out.

Out of uniform? Veronica's mind repeats as her imagination conjures up images of a very naked Logan.

Yeah I got stuck on that image too...still there...

mouthing what looks like "I love you" as he does so.

Aww, I love this! Sweet fluff, how I love you!

I'm wondering if you've thought about writing a companion piece from Logan's point of view?

[herowlness]

if RT doesn't resolve the V/L angsty mess he's created by the end of the season
My personal theory involves some gratification (in the way of make out and/or sex) but ends with Veronica panicked and leaving, and Logan deciding that he needs to get the hell out of Neptune for awhile and leaving town. Veronica reconsiders, and goes back, and he's GONE. BOOM! Cliffhanger. So that may be even more of an angsty mess. But ... yeah. I'm glad you like my version of 220 - even though I didn't specify what happens the next morning, but I think it's safe to say that it would be Kendall'less. =D

I loved the way you handled it too. You didn't throw them together, and you stayed true to Veronica needing time to figure stuff out.I'm glad that that rang true for you. I don't have the best Veronica voice, and my interpretation of her train of thought at that point is just seemingly endless confusion over what she wants and needs and Logan's words just throw one big ol' wrench into those plans. I tried to make it fit with her words the next

[adhuri_roshni]

Checking the FL so soon before class was a bad idea, but I'll quickly say that this was a great AU ending and the just the right combination of what you said is cheese and angst. :)

I was watching the episode, waiting for Logan to stop her from leaving...but he didn't. :(

[herowlness]

Hee, I know the feeling. Still, I appreciate that you took the time to leave feedback anyhow. =D

just the right combination of what you said is cheese and angst. :)
YAY! I try to balance them more now than I did in my earlier pieces (which tended to fall more on the level of OMG!SUPA-ANGST than anything else), and I'm glad that the mix worked for you.

I was watching the episode, waiting for Logan to stop her from leaving...but he didn't. :(
He totally DID, and Rob Thomas is just trying to pull one over on the viewers yet again with the Kendall scene. It's like Duncan and Veronica's fake break-up in 210 all over again! =clings to delusions for at least another 36 hours=

Thanks so much for the feedback! I'm so happy to hear that you enjoyed it! =D

[adhuri_roshni]

Ooh I like that thinking! Make room on the ship of delusion 'cause I'm jumping on. :)

[herowlness]

Yay! And I'm belated in replying - now there are only a few more hours left before our ship of delusion will likely spring a leak. (unless you think RT will try to fool us through the summer hiatus? =considers= )

YAY!

[smiles1_9]

Thank you for giving me a way better ending then what we saw!! I thought you did really well with the VMVO's. Great job, I loved it!!!

[herowlness]

Thanks so much for your kind words. I'm always uncertain when I try out a new writing style (such as these VMVO's), and I'm happy to hear that you think they came across pretty well.

Thanks so much for the feedback! :)

[sitebuilderchic]

aww! *tear* this was beautiful though it makes me think of the night all over again.

[herowlness]

But this is better, right? (outcome-wise, anyhow ... I don't know if my description can hope to compare to seeing the real thing ... :)

Thanks so much for the feedback!