FIC: Time (PG13) Logan/Veronica

[herowlness]

TITLE: Time
AUTHOR: Lizzy
CHARACTER/PAIRING: Logan/Veronica, Veronica POV
RATING: PG13, for a few curse words
SPOILERS: Goes AU mid-220, after a certain, particular scene
WORD COUNT: 2227
DISCLAIMER: They're not mine. (sadly) Just borrowing them to attempt to change the final arc of this past week's episode.
SUMMARY: Veronica always seems to run

Comments

[herowlness]

if RT doesn't resolve the V/L angsty mess he's created by the end of the season
My personal theory involves some gratification (in the way of make out and/or sex) but ends with Veronica panicked and leaving, and Logan deciding that he needs to get the hell out of Neptune for awhile and leaving town. Veronica reconsiders, and goes back, and he's GONE. BOOM! Cliffhanger. So that may be even more of an angsty mess. But ... yeah. I'm glad you like my version of 220 - even though I didn't specify what happens the next morning, but I think it's safe to say that it would be Kendall'less. =D

I loved the way you handled it too. You didn't throw them together, and you stayed true to Veronica needing time to figure stuff out.
I'm glad that that rang true for you. I don't have the best Veronica voice, and my interpretation of her train of thought at that point is just seemingly endless confusion over what she wants and needs and Logan's words just throw one big ol' wrench into those plans. I tried to make it fit with her words the next morning (since I figured she'd express some of the same sentiments, in her heart of hearts, while all that was going on), and I'm happy to hear that you found that in character.

Aww, I love this! Sweet fluff, how I love you!
They totally love each other (although the argument could be made that perhaps Logan doesn't *really* know what love is, since he's never been shown it, but that is neither here nor there), and I wanted them to admit it - at least to themselves. After an emotionally haring night, I felt that owning up to their true feelings (at least to themselves) was an important step for each of them to take. Being honest with themselves is step one - telling the other is the next.

I'm wondering if you've thought about writing a companion piece from Logan's point of view?
Actually, I haven't, and I wouldn't totally rule it out, but it likely wouldn't be written until after the season finale - so I'm not sure how relevant it would still be at that point. I have finals fast approaching and limited time to write at the moment. Still ... maybe during the summer hiatus, if the topic is still relevant? Then again, I have a half-dozen other companion pieces / theoretical epilogues half-started on my hard drive right now, so we'll have to see how that goes. :)

Thanks so much for the feedback!