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Fic: Chekhov's Law (R) Logan

Mar 04, 2006 23:01

Title: Chekhov’s Law
Author: ladydisdain225
Character/Pairing: Logan, hints of L/V, appearances by others.
Rating: R
Word Count: 2,493
Summary: He gets rid of the gun when she asks him to. AU from Ahoy Mateys. Angst.
Spoilers/Warnings: Through 2x08. Angst, violence

Author’s note: Written for lex_83’s Ask Questions Later challenge. Thanks so much to ( Read more... )

r, logan, ladydisdain225

Comments 30

kantayra March 5 2006, 08:15:01 UTC

Gah! Tearjerker! But, oh, the beautiful irony of it all...

He hoped she’d appreciate the irony.

*sniff sniff* Exactly. Poor Logan. :( Beautifully written, though.

ladydisdain225 March 10 2006, 11:34:10 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it.

Yeah, I definitely have to write something lighter next time. A caper mystery or something.

amaria March 5 2006, 11:06:48 UTC

The flashbacks are my favourite part. They go and they hurt and they flow so seamlessly and goddamn, this was just awesome. Go you.

ladydisdain225 March 10 2006, 11:35:21 UTC

I'm so thrilled you liked it, I just loved the idea of the flashbacks and I'm so glad it translated well.

strippedpink March 5 2006, 16:42:55 UTC

This was so great, woman. And yes...I knew what would happen going into it, but it STILL managed to throw me for a complete loop when IT happened.

The flashbacks were wonderful to serve as both foreshadowing and just to add impact to the entire situation.

Oh, and Han would SO kick Luke's ass. Pfft.

ladydisdain225 March 10 2006, 11:37:50 UTC

Han would TOTALLY kick Luke's ass. I mean, wimpy kid in pajamas or hot guy in leather?? Really not hard to choose. Oh, and in the fighting stuff too...

I'm glad the impact was still there. I was somewhat worried it wouldn't be, because the death is kindof the point of the fic, I didn't think there'd be any shock value and I wasn't sure what that would do to the emotional resonance, so I'm so happy you enjoyed it.

rowanceleste March 5 2006, 18:24:46 UTC

Fantastic story although you killed our Logan oh evil one!

Now Veronica is going to blame herself because she made him get rid of the gun even as she's mad that he got himself into the situation in the first place.

ladydisdain225 March 10 2006, 11:39:07 UTC

Yeah, I'm so evil lately. I have to remember to stop that.

I'm happy you liked it.

cafe_au_logan March 5 2006, 20:13:50 UTC

what an excellent way to bring out tears in my eyes..

Logan hadn’t argued the price, just given the guy what he wanted and tried not to feel jealous of a two year old... That made me wanna scream... "Logan WE love you" and then hug him..

And my god I wanted to kick Lilly's ass - “Grow up, Logan.”
He just wanted to play... bad girl !!!

ladydisdain225 March 10 2006, 11:43:15 UTC

Thank you for commenting, I'm glad you liked it.

The "Grow up Logan" was actually a ploy on her part, she was hoping to catch him off guard, thus his watching her hands for when she moved. I think Lilly probably enjoyed goofing around, but generally had to be coaxed into it, because she's not one to like not looking her best.