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Lead Me To Your Door - Lost - Charlie/Desmond

Jan 15, 2009 21:12

Title: Lead Me To Your Door
Pairing: Charlie/Desmond
Word Count: 7023
Rating: NC-17
A/N: Well, this was supposed to be a straight-up PWP for lostpicksix's "kink" prompt, using "Claiming or establishing ownership (private or public; by gesture, word, or ritual; with sex; with a collar and leash; with scent-marking or by biting)" from the kink list. However the ( Read more... )

pairing:charlie/desmond, character:charlie pace, i'm a perv, character:claire littleton, prompt:lostpicksix - 2, character:desmond hume, fandom:lost

Comments 8

babydazzle January 15 2009, 22:40:26 UTC

janie_tangerine January 16 2009, 15:37:20 UTC

Oh wow, what a great story! Aw, if things had gone this way.. *sigh*

First of all, I totally loved how you used Daniel/the freighter/Michael in this. It was so awesome to have rescued according to canon, except they weren't. Also, poor Daniel! I can just picture the poor guy freaking out at Jack and Sayid asking questions.

Also, major props for Bernard being present. I love myself some Bernard. ;)

That said, I absolutely loved the build-up you had it here. You wrote the both of them so well and I could just feel how poor Desmond was being repressed here. That conversation between Charlie and Claire when he realizes they aren't ever going to work as a couple was just so well done and IC, and I loved how Charlie slowly surrendered to the power of Desmond's chest framed in blue his feelings for Desmond. The part in the cabin was totally hot, but I think I loved the kiss best.

Instantly, Desmond surges against him like he's been waiting his entire life for this. Charlie finds himself backed against the cold wall, held there under the ( ... )

missy_useless January 16 2009, 23:40:08 UTC

I enjoyed this very much.

Your Charlie voice is perfect, and Desmond sounds ... totally like Desmond, too. ;) I also loved all the other characters in this fic, especially Hurley and Claire. And Daniel. My, I love how you managed to get them all rescued!

This is really, really great. Totally IC and funny and emotional and hot.

morphinelovexx January 17 2009, 21:11:54 UTC

GUH.

I just....and so...GOD. -fans self- I was hoping to leave something useful or insightful behind but uh, seeing as how my brain leaked from my ears and is currently a steaming puddle of melted goo on the floor, I doubt it's gonna happen.

Hit just the right spot, bravo.

tamanth February 14 2009, 16:40:19 UTC

Okay since this is definitely my favourite Chesmond fic and I keep coming back to it it's only right I leave feedback, right? God. I love this.
Things falling into place like it's inevitable and everyone getting off the island and I LOVE your Charlie-voice and Desmond-voice and Claire-voice since they're so spot-on. Also, this is quite hot. Yeah. XD