Lead Me To Your Door - Lost - Charlie/Desmond

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Title: Lead Me To Your Door
Pairing: Charlie/Desmond
Word Count: 7023
Rating: NC-17
A/N: Well, this was supposed to be a straight-up PWP for lostpicksix's "kink" prompt, using "Claiming or establishing ownership (private or public; by gesture, word, or ritual; with sex; with a collar and leash; with scent-marking or by biting)" from the kink list. However the

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[janie_tangerine]

Oh wow, what a great story! Aw, if things had gone this way.. *sigh*

First of all, I totally loved how you used Daniel/the freighter/Michael in this. It was so awesome to have rescued according to canon, except they weren't. Also, poor Daniel! I can just picture the poor guy freaking out at Jack and Sayid asking questions.

Also, major props for Bernard being present. I love myself some Bernard. ;)

That said, I absolutely loved the build-up you had it here. You wrote the both of them so well and I could just feel how poor Desmond was being repressed here. That conversation between Charlie and Claire when he realizes they aren't ever going to work as a couple was just so well done and IC, and I loved how Charlie slowly surrendered to the power of Desmond's chest framed in blue his feelings for Desmond. The part in the cabin was totally hot, but I think I loved the kiss best.

Instantly, Desmond surges against him like he's been waiting his entire life for this. Charlie finds himself backed against the cold wall, held there under the weight of Desmond's body. His mouth opens under the claiming onslaught of Desmond's tongue. It's dizzying. Like a rowing boat in a whirlpool, there is no choice but to let himself be swept along.

Mm. *dreamy eyes* Also, I loved that Charlie calls him wanker while they have sex. ;) I loved this!