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The Last Two Men [9/11] - Heroes - Mohinder/Sylar

Nov 02, 2008 19:27

Title: The Last Two Men [9/11]
Pairing: Mohinder/Sylar
Word Count: 2561
Rating: R
Warnings: end-of-the-world, character deaths, zombie-vampires.
A/N: Inspired by 'I Am Legend'. Thank you to Babylon_pride for betaing!
Previous parts: One :: Two :: Three :: Four :: Five :: Six :: Seven :: Eight
Summary: On the 13th of November 2010, the dead began to remain ( Read more... )

pairing:mohinder/sylar, fandom:heroes, character:sylar, character:mohinder suresh, verse:the last two men

Comments 23

neshel November 2 2008, 19:58:34 UTC

O.o

Nooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

greyelveneyes November 2 2008, 20:00:54 UTC

First reaction: YAY, it's been updated!

After reading:

OH. MY. GOD.

O___O

Final reaction: Okay, I'm going to freak out over here now.

You are just determined to kill me. I mean...WOW. I don't even know what to do with myself right now; I'm in shock. The sort of silent desperation Sylar shows in all this is so heartbreaking: with his confession that he had wanted Mohinder to be safe, his reluctance to tell Mohinder that he was changing. What's not being outright said about Sylar is just as important as Mohinder's reactions, and that's totally love to me. ♥

HOW IS THIS GOING TO PLAY OUT OMG.

*flail*

aurilly November 2 2008, 20:01:02 UTC

I echo that statement. NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!

This was one of the most heartbreaking chapters of anything I've ever read. WAAAAH. Sylar's declaration was so heartbreaking without being in the least bit schmoopy, and Mohinder's inability to say anything in response out loud was even more heartbreaking, and THEN the thoughts he was thinking in his head but didn't say were just GUH.

Excuse me while I go cry.

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cookie_simone November 2 2008, 21:44:54 UTC

So much about this pairing is in everything that isn't said: it drives me mad!

YES! Exactly. That's exactly how I felt while reading this. It's awful but I love it.

ladywilde80 November 2 2008, 20:25:35 UTC

OHMYGAWD! What a fantastic chapter, I was on the edge of my seat throughout. Yea. This fic is going to break my heart but I could care less. Such an emotional and beautiful written chapter. I love this story so much, I wish you'd never stop writing it.

*loves*

blossommorphine November 2 2008, 20:34:56 UTC

WHY?!

You update, and I am happy.

Mohinder begins to die, and I am sad.

Damn you woman, for writing such a captivating and heartbreaking chapter. Mohnder doesn't just decide to throw himself at Sylar just because he and the world is ending. Sylar doesn't break down, but he is breaking. Perfect and evil. Thank you for writing and stop breaking my heart! XD