At Gunpoint 3/10

Jun 26, 2010 00:13

Title: At Gunpoint 3/10
Pairing: Jonghyun/Key
Genre: AU
Rating: PG for this chapter
Summary: Jonghyun's mind can't stop racing and the sun won't stop glaring into his eyes, when he almost runs over some kid with his bike.
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!chaptered, f: shinee, p: jonghyun/key

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honeychann June 26 2010, 06:36:25 UTC
Gah, I get more in love when this story every time you update! ♥
This Jonghyun is so hot ;D I just love the encounter between Jonghyun & Key :D
lol, and Minho~ Glad to see him! He takes his job very serious business. XD
Nooooo! Jonghyun dyed his pretty blond hair ;~; I miss the blond D':

Ah, and two lines I just loved:
Zip lock bags and guns are a good combination.
&
He manages to limit his thoughts to Well, that's definitely an upgrade, and clears his throat.

♥♥♥♥
I just love it~! ^0^

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x_saru_x June 26 2010, 11:20:58 UTC
Really happy to hear that :33
I think the fact that he dyed his hair was the most painful for me lmao. Nah, it's for business' sake and he's cute either way, so ♥

I'm glad you enjoyed it~
Thanks for reading ♥

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lea_suju June 26 2010, 09:24:39 UTC
Ah~ this is so interesting! XD Please continue to update! XD

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x_saru_x June 26 2010, 11:21:23 UTC
I will!
Thanks for reading :3

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mei_zi June 26 2010, 09:35:34 UTC
There isn't much Jongkey action yet, but you'll make up for that, no? 8D
I love how easily Jonghyun can ease himself into a role. Goes to show what a super sleuth he is. ♥

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x_saru_x June 26 2010, 11:23:36 UTC
You'll be the judge of that, lol, but I most definitely will try :]
Jonghyun's damn proud of himself for that, aha. He's more than good at what he is /nod

Thank you for reading! ♥

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almighty_hee June 26 2010, 13:48:02 UTC
heeeey finally!i've been waiting for this fic!you should update more often,because everytime i finish reading a chap i'm so curious about the next one!!!
i don't know but i can feel jonghyun here...dyeing your hair in a color you don't like it's torture..poor jj.
update soon,ok????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

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x_saru_x June 26 2010, 14:51:27 UTC
Ugh, wish I could :/
lol I know, right. He'll get used to it :3

I'll update next Friday night, naturally~
Thanks for reading ♥

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silvercookies June 26 2010, 17:57:13 UTC
Wow I just love how ~smooth~ Jonghyun is here *_*
Sunshiney is good, Jonghyun, it's goooooood~
Boy also needs to realise he looks awesome in both brown and two-tone hair. EHEHEHEHEHE.

I can't wait for the action to start!
But take as long as you need to build it up, LOL xP

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x_saru_x June 26 2010, 18:31:20 UTC
Jonghyun's one smooth mofo, that's for sure u_u
And I'll agree to that; boy needs to open his eyes to how hot he is.

LOL that's a first! It won't really take all that long lmao.
Thank you for reading! ♥

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