they lied when they said the good die young (Patrick/Pete, PG)

[fianna_fialena]

They lied when they said the good die young (Fall Out Boy gen)
(1210 words) // PG
for January 23rd.
Soundtracked by Anberlin’s Alexithymia. I strongly recommend you put it on, because the effect won’t be as good if you don’t. (Plus it’s an awesome song.)

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Comments

[bunnymuffin41]

=(

So sad

[fianna_fialena]

Yeah, I know. Woe Patrick. Woez. :(

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[fobxfaerie]

I swear I commented on this when I read it the other day, but I had to reread it today and didn't see mine.

I loved this.
It completely broke my heart-
in a good way, if that's possible...

[fianna_fialena]

Awww reread! :D :D That's a big compliment! And yeah, I think it's possible. Broke my heart too, a little. Oh Patrick. *hugs him*

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[klawick003]

Shit, man, shit.

The ending kind of shattered my heart. This was really great. I love the little things Patrick did to remember Pete and how he stopped over time. You have a way of conveying Patrick's emotions really well.

[fianna_fialena]

Thank you! :D Oh, your review made me smile a lot! :D

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[becomingblurred]

G-God dammit. Just... Wow. I. Owch. I really wish I could write something more coherent, but I really can't. Although, I must say, you portray Patrick in such a way that it breaks my heart and I love it. Great job.

[fianna_fialena]

Incoherent reviews are totally the best kind! :D Thanks so much!

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[fianna_fialena]

Awwww, okay. <3 <3 I'm sorry I hurt you.

Thanks for reviewing!