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Verdict, Ch. 1

Feb 20, 2010 12:08

Title: Verdict
Author: fffriction1984 [tbsupervillains ]
Chapters: really short chapter 1/??
Genre: AU, crime, suspense, het, general, action (in bits, I guess)
Warnings: I’m toying with a lot of clichés here, characters acting OOC, English is not my mother tongue
Rating: NC17 to be safe
Pairings: -
Characters: the usual suspects I’d say; Danger Gang, Gazette, Screw, Dir en grey, ( Read more... )

verdict

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tbsupervillains February 20 2010, 13:11:37 UTC

I really don't know yet XD I started writing the second chapter, and I know who's going to be the evil cop, but I'm still not sure who that mysterious captive is... XD

I'm waiting for the weather to get nicer; and when it is, I'll go and take a walk, inspiration hunting and such. XD

But thanks for reading! I'll try to update one of the other fics really really really soon. ^^

samuraisongbird February 20 2010, 22:24:11 UTC

I wonder who's the guy getting arrested, and for what. :P I'm curious now.

Looks like a fellow het writer has entered the crime genre too~. XD

tbsupervillains February 20 2010, 22:31:54 UTC

I still have no idea who the "captive" is, I'm not even sure yet, what crime has been committed. lol. But I know who I want to be the "bad cop". There's a "good cop", too, but I don't know who that is, yet. But there'll be a looooot of characters, like sidekicks. I've already decided to let SCREW be in it, I've got perfect roles for them XD

But yeah, I got into this because I felt liek committing a crime last night. XD

Thanks for reaaaading and commenting <3

samuraisongbird February 20 2010, 22:34:49 UTC

Woohoo! :D I wonder what Screw's role is going to be...oh great now my curiosity rises even more! Not like it's a bad thing.

tbsupervillains February 20 2010, 22:41:23 UTC

I don't want to spoil, but they're going to be rather young and inexperienced and they cause a loooot of trouble in their positions. XD It's like a continuation of their roles in Everything Ends if I have to be honest. I really liked them there. :3

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liarose February 22 2010, 15:54:48 UTC

who is he??
he was in the kitchen, cooking...but nah! I don't have the guts to guess XDXb

<3<3

tbsupervillains February 22 2010, 16:25:06 UTC

It's not Kai XD
Lol, with all the readers guessing and guessing I feel like this is some sort of game here, like Scottland Yard XD (I don't know if that game is known internationally, but it was quite a hit in the 90s in Europe XD)

Thanks for reading and commenting :3

liarose February 23 2010, 15:36:16 UTC

I'm Kai biased^^ but somehow I know it's never meant to be him, just, you know Xb

not only this story, I can't figure out who is in your other fic [the one about earthquake?!]

I like this fic...

tbsupervillains February 23 2010, 15:41:40 UTC

Kai looks way too innocent for the role of the captive and the things he's allegedly done... XD

Yeah, the one with the earthquake is confusing like this too. But that one has another motive. When I continue writing and posting that one, it will become clear why I didn't name "the guy" yet. XD

This is some sort of cliffhangering, I guess. But who the captive is will be revealed in the next chapter :3

~fffriction

scheatcafe March 14 2010, 18:45:00 UTC

I'm going to start reading this series. Actually, I already have ^_^

I love the start, it already sounds interesting!! XDD

*goes to read the next chapter to find out who this guy is*

tbsupervillains March 14 2010, 19:12:01 UTC

Ah, thanks a lot! There might be parts that seem "sucky", but I'm kind of writing this at it goes.

But yeah, thanks for stopping by and reading. It's hard to really attract readers when you don't write slash at all, so having you here is highly appreciated. ^^ *showers you with cookies*

~fffriction

scheatcafe March 14 2010, 19:27:08 UTC

Yay cookies <3

That's what I generally do for the sake of my ideas because if I don't, I lose my pace.

I know how that's like with Asian bands especially jrock, but I seriously think your story is awesome. I read till Chapter 6, one after another, that's kind of rare for me to do because I get bored easily.

Update soon :3

tbsupervillains March 14 2010, 19:40:08 UTC

I'm also jotting down notes and carrying a small notebook with me wherever I go because I get the best and weirdest ideas when I'm doing something else than writing XD

And thanks a lot, really. When people tell me they like this, that's like Christmas and Birthday at the same day for me XD Would you mind if I add you with my writing journal? I don't read personal entries, just to make it easier to keep track of each other's fics? :3

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