Comments | ff_yuri_drabble: I Miss You. Aerith/Yuffie. Final Fantasy VII. Ghost.

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I Miss You. Aerith/Yuffie. Final Fantasy VII. Ghost.

Jul 21, 2011 20:27

Title: I Miss You
Fandom: Final Fantasy VII
Pairing: Aerith/Yuffie
Prompt: Ghost
Rating: T
Words: 400
Spoilers: The events of Final Fantasy VII
Author's Note: It's been a while, hasn't it? :) Glad to be back.

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prompt: ghost, author: thunderousmoon, fandom: ffvii - ogc, pairing: aerith/yuffie

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ryu19 July 21 2011, 21:17:02 UTC

Nice use of first person here. Also like how you portrayed the relationship and showing Aerith's caring nature. Looking forward to your next drabble!

machina_dues July 23 2011, 16:25:11 UTC

I don't mean to challenge your knowledge, or anything, but this is second person. When the main characters is referred to as "You" it's second person.

And thunderousmoon: That was really good. I liked it.

ryu19 July 23 2011, 16:42:20 UTC

Yeah it is, now I feel stupid. Explains why I never write in second person.

machina_dues July 23 2011, 17:16:37 UTC

Second person is more difficult to write in, anyway. I tried to do it once, but I ended up accidentally switching bak to first without even noticing until the end of the post.

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silvr_dagger July 25 2011, 04:31:54 UTC

Nice job with this one. The language is vivid and poetic, and I very much like your portrayal of Yuffie. You don't see many second person fics out there, and here it works quite well.

thunderousmoon August 5 2011, 00:55:45 UTC

Thanks very much :3 I've always liked Yuffie and like to show different sides of her other than the bratty/hyper part that the games mainly portray her as.