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Dreamlinks chapter 2

Jul 01, 2011 12:10

Title: Dreamlinks Chapter 2
Fandom: Crossover (X/X-2, XII)
Pairing: Rikku/Ashe
Prompt: Dreams
Rating: PG
Words: 500
Spoilers: Character details
Author's Note: I really like my setting idea for this one, but I think I went a little too far. If anyone has ideas for future settings, comment them. I need really heavenly, surreal settings, that excell ( Read more... )

fandom: ffx-2, pairing: ashe/rikku, author: machina_dues, prompt: dreams, fandom: crossover, fandom: ffx, fandom: ffxii - ogc

Comments 6

silvr_dagger July 2 2011, 03:50:26 UTC

Another nice scene here - I really like the way you write Ashe and Rikku and their interactions. It's also interesting that they seem to be showing up in places that are the opposite of what they're used to. As far as ideas for future settings, I do like the idea of frozen fire. What about a floating city, or someplace after dark with a lot of lights or lanterns? Some other interesting questions, if you need ideas: do the dreams respond to their emotional state, or their memories? Is there a way to explore farther into the dream world? Is there anything dangerous about it?

I'm definitely not a mod, but for what it's worth, I'm not seeing anything in these drabbles that would require a warning for non-con, or even dub-con. I don't think you need to worry about including a warning for dreams they can't control, as long as neither is coercing the other into anything they feel uncomfortable about.

machina_dues July 2 2011, 04:04:54 UTC

I think I've decided that the dreams are based on their memories, although they may gradually fall out of that. I have an idea that would mark the beginning of the love interest... I got it while playing FFXIII. But I don't want to give too much away...

hamimifk July 2 2011, 14:36:50 UTC

^-^ I really like this. I'm surprisingly falling in love with this pairing even though I'm not an Ashe fan. Love the scenarios you place them in. I'm not too great with places though I'd have to second silvr_dagger's idea of frozen fire.

>.> And what non-con is here? There is none. I think they're pretty happy meeting and such. =3

machina_dues July 2 2011, 15:49:50 UTC

I'm confused. I thought Non-con was non canon. There's new lingo everywhere I go...

hamimifk July 2 2011, 17:09:45 UTC

Eh? No. Non-con means 'non-consensual', i.e. anything that would qualify as rape. Dub-con means 'dubious consent', i.e. where it seems like it's non-con but the other party actually does want it in some way or another.

^^; You don't have to warn for non canon unless you want to.

machina_dues July 2 2011, 17:16:04 UTC

Oh, okay. I'll edit that out. Whoops.