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FFX: "Dream"

Apr 03, 2007 19:26

Title: Dream
For: mizuiroten
Medium: Fanfiction
Request: Yuna, the fayth of Bahamut and the memory of Tidus
Fandom: FFX
Characters/Pairings: Yuna, Lulu; Yuna/Tidus implied
Rating/Warnings: PG
Feedback: Yes, please, always. Any and all feedback, including concrit, is welcome.
Spoilers: For the ending of FFX
Word Count: 2920
Notes: Many thanks to lassarina, official ( Read more... )

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Comments 13

accio_yossarian April 5 2007, 01:21:34 UTC

Your Yuna was perfect; she's just as elegant and compassionate as she was in the books. Your Lulu was well-executed too. I always have deeply enjoyed the friendship between Lulu and Yuna; their concern for each other is just beautiful, and this work shows it.

owlmoose April 9 2007, 05:58:29 UTC

Thank you! I appreciate the compliment. :) The relationships between the characters is one of the things I love most about FFX, so I'm glad that came through.

muggy_mountain April 12 2007, 16:29:59 UTC

This is such a believable, realistic piece.

Opening with Yuna's nonsensical dreams was such an effective way to start; it brings the reader straight into her heart --we all understand the absurd-yet-universally-human dream logic.

It makes us believe her when she says she doesn't have that kind of dream any longer and it hurts all the more ( ... )