Comments | fetusziall: anything for you

fetusziall

anything for you

Dec 01, 2012 01:18

you bring my heart to it's knees, and it's killing me.

angryfighter!zayn fic just because of my feels, and thank you to lara for the prompt. this one's completely and a hundred percent for you. (zayn/niall, niall/harry)

( you wear these bruises like they're kisses on your face )

pairing: zayn and niall, via ljapp, fandom: one direction

Comments 7

oc_gone December 29 2012, 19:59:45 UTC

I'm so floored by this. Ziall might be one of my fave pairings, but this is absolutely beautifully written. I loved Zayn and Niall's characterizations, and even the way you shed some light on Harry's was wonderful. Hoping more people will recognize this and your talent.

fetusziall December 29 2012, 20:25:55 UTC

oh my god, thank you! i love this comment so much, i've literally read it over like twenty times. it really means so much to me that you like it, thank you for reading and leaving this absolutely lovely review :)

anonymous January 23 2013, 11:33:17 UTC

so you little asshole ( ... )

fetusziall January 23 2013, 11:37:27 UTC

i'm laughing so hard thank you very much honestly it means the world and i love you, thank you thank you thank youuuu! x

nozaynnogain March 22 2013, 05:15:08 UTC

this is my absolute favorite ziall story. i don't know, i replied to your comment on my story but this story ruined me?? i've read it about 15 times and every single time it gets better. my favorite line is when niall tells zayn nobody's touched him like this and I JUST... it's like niall just /changes/ zayn for the better and zayn is inexplicably, completely head-over-heels in love with him and it's so, so beautiful.

the only thing i'd have to comment on is the resolution between harry and zayn? it seemed a bit odd, considering niall's history with harry and such for zayn just to be okay with being friends with harry? it was a bit anti-climactic.

but otherwise LOVELY LOVELY job and i wish i could write like this. absolutely floored.

fetusziall March 22 2013, 11:56:48 UTC

this comment is so long and beautiful i feel so bad for leaving such a short one on your fic now oh my god

thank you so much i'm really glad you like it because i kind of wrote it in a rush for my friend on some kind of angry!zayn sexually frustrated impulse and it's so cute that you like it omg

also yeah i didn't really want harry and zayn to make up but i figured i should probably put some cliche perfect ending where everyone's happy idk but yeah

thank you so so so much for this <3

nozaynnogain March 22 2013, 15:18:07 UTC

wait pls don't feel bad at all. i generally don't leave comments unless i have something meaningful to say??? urgh :)
i've recommended this fic to a lot of ppl so i hope that's okay. idk if they can access them or not bc of the locked journal thing??? but anyways :)

you should really put your stories up on ao3 or something because everybody needs to read them to learn how to write some zayn/niall :O