anything for you
you bring my heart to it's knees, and it's killing me.
angryfighter!zayn fic just because of my feels, and thank you to lara for the prompt. this one's completely and a hundred percent for you. (zayn/niall, niall/harry)
( you wear these bruises like they're kisses on your face )
you think you can come in here and just drop a little ziall/narry fanfic on my profile and just walk away like it's nothing.
i fucking see it.
open it
expect fluff for some god forsaken reason, like you woulld actually be kind enough to give me fluff, no thatt's not how shanelle rolls she likes to slaughter people
and i start reading it
AND IT IS MOTHERFUCKING ANGST LIKE WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME EINFNRJGFG ANGRY TOUGH FIGHTER ZAYN AND JACKASS EVIL ABUSIVE HARRY AND FUCING GENTLE FRAGILE NIALL LIKE NO NNO NO FHBDF I FUJKNING REFUSE NO HEVRJGB WHY THE FUCK DO YIOU THINK PULLING THIS SHIT IS OKAY. IT ISN'T. I'M VOMITING TEARS OF BLOOD AS WE SPEAK. SOMEONE GET THE BLEACH SHOTS ON ME TONIGHT LKE FKCING NHJO\
see what you did? my feels rant was even longer than normal.
Okay, so now onto the real review you motherfcker.
you literally make me fall in love with ziall more and more every time i fucking read one of your fucking ziall works. i seriously was having major ziam feels lately because of tumblr and such but then this fcker comes and bitch slaps me until i'm fulll blown ziall. and then you stick narry in it which is a previous major otp of mine you skank. ugh
It's just like I can't explain how your writing makes me feel. well first of all it makes me feel like shit because i can't write half as good as that. and then secondly it is just like absolutely breathtaking. you capture characters so well in such a short amount of writing. in just a handful of scenes you make me feel as if i've been with and known these characters for ages. i can visibly see niall's vulnerablity and fragility and harry's angst and bitterness and zayn's pure struggle with himself. you always capture zayn the best idk how or why but it's like your major gift. i feel like the whole fight was also a metaphor to the battle of feelings inside him showing how much niall really really means to him and idk i'm just a mess right now. and the whole thing with the fight was just like a perfect thing. like the tense and pov and tempo and mixture of flashback with present time just molded together to create this thing of perfection and i can't even explain how mcuh of a mess i am right now it is dangerous for my health for you to send me these things like it's like i'm the addict and it's the drug and it is killing me but i need it to live because without your writing i would go into withdrawl and fuck why do you have to live half way across the world because i jsut want to hug you and then kill you for doing this to me like why i have midterm exams all week in fact i have one in less than 12 hours and instead of studying i'm crying acid k bye you horrible amazing evil creature.
--Paige
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