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fernedakki

My Love is a Souvenir Act 6: Greek Islands Chapter 5

Jan 24, 2011 23:17

Title: My Love is a Souvenir
Act 6: Greek Islands Chapter: 5/?

Previous Chapters:
Act 1: Ibiza 1 - 2 - 3 - 4 - 5 - 6 - 7 - 8 - 9 [END]
Act 2: Paris 1 - 2 - 3 - 4 - 5 - 6 - 7 [END]
Act 3: Prague 1 - 2 - 3 - 4 - 5 - 6 - 7 - 8 [END]
Act 4: London 1 - 2 - 3 - 4 - 5 - 6 - 7 [END]
Act 5: French Riviera 1 - 2 - 3 - 4 - 5 - 6 - 7 - 8 - 9 - 10 - 11 - 12 [END ( Read more... )

series: my love is a souvenir, au, fic, daniel agger/fernando torres

Comments 14

stin8774 January 24 2011, 17:29:16 UTC

WOW.. I'm totally speedchless.. So I guess Sergio made his way into the story =S Apparently he knew about Nandos fling with Dan..
What's going to happen next? Can't wait for moooore

fernedakki January 27 2011, 13:38:13 UTC

Of course he couldn't be left out. Though he merely appears, this story fulls about him. ^^

vicky86x January 24 2011, 17:58:36 UTC

And there is Sergio again... You couldn't leave them happy like that for much longer, I have to say I saw that coming ;)

I still have hope though, Fernando was obviously shocked, out of words, Sergio is his long-term boyfriend after all. That he left with him doesn't mean he really wants to be with him, right? *sighs* well that's at least what I hope :(

Poor Dan so broken again, but somehow it's his own mistake, he knew what he gets when he's with Fernando, so far Fernando didn't say anything else. Sure the conversations with Xabi made quite clear that he cares A LOT for Dan, but Dan doesn't know about it...

Oh and I have to say I feel for Sergio too, as Dan noticed he is hurt as well, evil Nando just has to chose and stop playing with these two ;)

Great chapter, want moooooore ;)

fernedakki January 27 2011, 13:48:44 UTC

Continue. XD

sophie_lfc January 24 2011, 20:27:32 UTC

If this is not going to take a good end, I'm going to kill Sergio! >_<
But awesome written, as always. Thanks for posting <3

fernedakki January 27 2011, 13:51:08 UTC

Don't hurt Sergio, he's been hurt enough already. ;P

kiaretta985 January 24 2011, 20:46:54 UTC

the fact that Sergio knew actually doesn't surprise me. but Daniel's reaction when Sergio called Fernando "my boyfriend" did! I mean, if you don't talk about something/someone doesn't mean it/he doesn't exist!

fernedakki January 27 2011, 13:55:36 UTC

But when someone say that fact out loud, the nail-shot blew off fog of obliviousness and hit directly on his head off-guardly. ^^

jungle_moon January 25 2011, 03:11:12 UTC

YES! YES!! YESSSS!!! This is what I was hoping for and THANK GOD IT'S HAPPENING SOONER RATHER THAN LATER!!

The fact that Sergio KNEW all along and WAS IN PAIN really tugged something at my heart! And for Dan being able to see it AND understand Sergio and knowing his place..OH MY GOD..I WANT TO HUG DANNY SO MUCH AND TOLD HIM THAT HE'LL BE OK!!

Glad that Sergio caught them..NANDO..of guard like that!! God, that will teach him a lesson for sure! I just hope this event will really made him think already! Make him to choose, to make up his mind, to WHO IS DANNY EXACTLY IN HIS LIFE! Yes..he has to make a decision about Danny, coz once he knows where Danny stands in his life, he'll know whether Sergio is STILL his boyfriend and his love, or not.

fernedakki January 27 2011, 13:58:26 UTC

Nando is so stubborn, keep that in mind. XD