Love the Fleur/Gabrielle. Fleur loves him, more than any other. It's just that what we have is more than love, it's everything, and it always wins out. Beautiful :)
& thank you for the grammar comment too -- I do my best but sometimes things slip through. I'm not sure about the comma/semicolon either, I think I tried both and ended up going with the one that looked right... but probably wasn't :P I'll look into it.
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Glad you liked!
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Fleur loves him, more than any other. It's just that what we have is more than love, it's everything, and it always wins out.
Beautiful :)
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&thank you :)
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I want to write more of them, the idea is so much fun! :)
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"The boys are 'working', I thought we could spend some time together.
And I believe that comma ought to be a semicolon, though I'm not sure.
Nice read.
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& thank you for the grammar comment too -- I do my best but sometimes things slip through. I'm not sure about the comma/semicolon either, I think I tried both and ended up going with the one that looked right... but probably wasn't :P I'll look into it.
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(Eh, I'm having fandom issues at the moment, I need new ones.)
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