Around the clock

[lowbatterie]

Title: Let's Take The Afternoon Off
Fandom: Law & Order: SVU
Pairing: Casey/Olivia
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 200
A/N: X-posted.

Casey nearly jumped out of her chair as the door to her office slammed shut. She arched an eyebrow, laying down her pen.

“Something I can help you with, Detective?”

Olivia wasn’t listening; she was too busy closing all

Comments

[theflyingshadow]

"listening to the solid heartbeat proving the cop was still alive and well in her arms."

I loved this line, very romantic. And very well written? But why so short? I think that "in a heartbeat" could have been even more powerful if the descriptions were a bit longer.
But maybe it's just me... ^_^

[akte]

The first one was nice and sexy, and the second really built that nervousness of OMG IS SHE OKAY? really well for such a short piece! Loved both of them :)

[greenovalfruit]

Hee, Casey is a red-gold blur. I like that.