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sheepfairy September 20 2006, 05:42:30 UTC
Oh, yay, that was very interesting!

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ilthit September 20 2006, 06:29:38 UTC
How cool! That fits quite well! It's chilling to think what followed, though Elizabeth's ruthlessness must have had a start somewhere, and the flipside of love is as good a place as any.

Re: it being sisterslash, not that I'm opposed to sisterslash: Mary and Elizabeth were raised quite separately, not as sisters, so it would have all the connotations of a cousinly relationship, if there wasn't also all that vying for the throne stuff that made them enemies.

Your word count was 212, by the way.

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ilthit September 20 2006, 06:30:40 UTC
Also, forgot to mention, wonderful metaphorical imagery. I like the contrast between the courtly activity and Elizabeth's motionless seclusion.

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girlchild September 21 2006, 19:34:15 UTC
I really enjoyed this! Your characterization of Elizabeth was very lovely, and I liked your use of courtly language. I hope that you write more Tudor history-fic-- perhaps Elizabeth/Mary Queen of Scots? (You may have inspired me!)

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cupidsbow September 26 2006, 09:19:20 UTC
This is brilliant. Thank you.

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