Comments | femslash100: Story Time. :-)

amazon_syren in femslash100

Story Time. :-)

Aug 27, 2006 14:50

Greetings. :-)

Overlaps with that "You've got no self control" story I did a while back.

Fandom: CSI (Las Vegas)
Pairing: Sara/Catherine, Sara/Andie(OFC), Catherine/Warrick
Challenge: 15 - Christmas, 9 - Discovery
Word Count: 190
Rating: PG
Title: ( “Poison” )

challenge15, challenge9, fandom: csi vegas, author: amazon_syren, challenge80

Comments 13

carrieellen August 27 2006, 19:28:01 UTC

Hi there. I've been keeping an eye on the stuff you write, or at least the stuff you post here. Firstly, icon love, though that does have NOTHING to do with your writing. ;) Secondly, your writing... gah. I have no idea who this Andie character is because I no longer watch CSI. But if you can read a story with a character you don't know, and still feel the emotions and, better yet, understand them, that's the mark of an excellent writer. Brava.

amazon_syren August 27 2006, 22:07:33 UTC

Thank you. :-) The icon is my undergrad graduation photo. :-) I'm glad you like it. :-)

Re: Andie: Andie is an original character (thense the "(OFC)" in the pairing... provided I remembered to put that in there... I'll have to check). She's a recurring (sp) OFC who I made up as part of Sara's past (as opposed to a Random Guest Star type of of OFC).

I'm glad she is real for you. :-) Thank you. :-)

carrieellen August 27 2006, 22:10:35 UTC

See, this is me being not quite down with the femmeslash lingo, I thought OFC was Other Featured Character, rather than Original. *sheepish grin*

amazon_syren August 28 2006, 01:03:49 UTC

Hehe.
See, I just asume everyone else is more up on this stuff than I am. (I recently learned the term: Original Female (or Male) Character --? OFC (or OMC, but I'm not worried about that one. ;-)

- Ta,
- Me. :-)

4ensicbones August 28 2006, 02:58:55 UTC

My heart would break for her, if it hadn’t been broken years ago.
Poor babe, I think, sadly. But I also think, Serves her right.
Again, this totally hurts.

Great job.

amazon_syren August 28 2006, 12:43:29 UTC

:-)

Why thank you. :-)

It's funny/wierd: I hurt my/the characters, and I (apparently) hurt my readers. And yet you keep coming back.
That's kind of neat. :-)

<*Really isn't sadistic. Honest*>

:-)

4ensicbones August 30 2006, 01:50:39 UTC

We keep coming back because you make the hurting/emotional trainwreckage of the characters so intriguing and awesome (for lack of better word). And doing it in drabble form? Amazing.

<*Really isn't sadistic. Honest*>
Sadists are hot.

Not that anyone really needed to know that.

amazon_syren August 30 2006, 02:14:10 UTC

Uh... Okay, when *I* say 'sadistic', I'm not talking about the drabble equivalent of a cute domme in nice boots. I'm talking about the drabble equivalent of a serial rapist who's escalating.

Just to clarify. ;-)

I assume you mean the cute-domme type, yes? :-) <*looks really, really hopeful*> :-)

Thread 5

frogfrizz August 28 2006, 03:52:41 UTC

Lovely fic. Absolutely broke at the last line. :( Oh my. Well, I'm loving the stuff you post so keep 'em coming! :)

amazon_syren August 28 2006, 12:43:59 UTC

Will do. :-) (As they come. :-)

Sorry for breaking you. :-\

obfan4ever August 28 2006, 04:24:26 UTC

Wow, as others have said, that last line really broke my heart.

I know Andie must be going through some major internal hell. With her being still in love with Sara and not yet over what Sara did to her.

Great job!!

amazon_syren August 28 2006, 12:45:08 UTC

Re: Major Internal Hell.

Well, yeah. She's not much of a stranger to major internal hell, though, so she's dealing.

I kinda want the three of them to go out for drinks together or something, but gods know that won't work. Not yet anyway. <*shudder*> What a mess that would be.