Comments | femgenficathon: Of Heroes and Villains by petulantgod (Lilycentric

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Of Heroes and Villains by petulantgod (Lilycentric - PG13)

Aug 15, 2005 18:33

Title: Of Heroes and Villains
Author: Seph (petulantgod)
Rating: PG13 for language, implied violence, and subject matter
Character: Lily Potter
Word Count: 1,000
Summary: She might die, but he won't. He can't. And as long as he lives, she lives. James lives. Harry is not going to die.
Warnings: character death
Author's Notes: There are new words now that ( Read more... )

femgen 2005, author: petulantgod, character: lily evans potter, fandom: harry potter, titles m-z

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prettyclever August 15 2005, 23:56:31 UTC

Awww-uh! Thank you so so so much. *adores*

apiphile August 15 2005, 23:57:50 UTC

That was beautiful.

prettyclever August 15 2005, 23:59:36 UTC

Thank you. ♥

tarie August 16 2005, 00:05:21 UTC

Oh, Seph.

This is so heartbreaking and gorgeous. You've perfectly captured the moment and it's so fragile and beautiful and real.

Thank you for this.

prettyclever August 16 2005, 00:06:33 UTC

*blushes* YAYE! I'm so glad you liked it. *hugs*

maeglinyedi August 16 2005, 00:10:01 UTC

What a beautiful and powerful scene. You've captured Lily and her thoughts and emotions very well. Loved it. :-)

prettyclever August 16 2005, 00:11:02 UTC

Thank you so much! *beams*

ignipes August 16 2005, 00:11:38 UTC

Oh, I love Lily in this, moving through panic to determination. She comes across as so strong. Everyone always forgets that Lily was the original hero of the story -- without her, Voldie would probably have won the first war and there'd be nothing after that.

Great job!

prettyclever August 16 2005, 00:14:58 UTC

Oh thank you so much! And yes, Lily was such a hero. I'm glad you thought it did her some kind of justice.