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Fic: "Muse" (VM/DM)

Jan 18, 2007 04:40

Title: Muse
Author: Cat Latin
Fandom: LOTR rps
Pairings: VM/? VM/DM
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 4771
Summary: Don’t abandon what inspires you.
Notes: Written for Shanalle’s 2 Lines Challenge, 2006
Disclaimer: Sadly, I do not know the lovely men. No profits were made; no harm is intended. This is a work of fiction.

2 Lines Assigned: I never took the ( Read more... )

nc-17, dominic/viggo, surprise pairing

Comments 14

rawa_02 January 18 2007, 13:50:53 UTC

That was exquisite.

cat_latin January 18 2007, 14:18:25 UTC

Thank you so much!

feelforfaith January 18 2007, 19:09:44 UTC

I don't like you," Viggo announces loudly.
"No," the disturbingly Dom-like thing agrees. "But you still want to touch me." Dom's eyes glitter up at Viggo from under his lashes. He stretches artfully, making his tattered low-riders dip lower, and Viggo's eyes stroke across the shadows under his ribs and hips. The photos spill to the floor. "So touch me."

This was so good, so very very good. The atmosphere, the blurred line between reality and hallucinations or fantasies, the visions of Dom who looked and behaved like Dom but not quite--contrasted with the real Dom. Fantastic story. And excellent writing. And it's one of my favorite pairings :).

PS. If I could offer a suggestion: it's much easier to read a story if there are blank lines between all paragraphs.

cat_latin January 18 2007, 21:05:12 UTC

Thank you! I agree about the paragraph thing. Laziness on my part. I'll fix it this evening.

Update: done. Hope that's easier on the eyes.

whoa tattoobelly January 19 2007, 02:06:52 UTC

This is one of the best things I've read in awhile. Excellent work!

Re: whoa cat_latin January 19 2007, 13:41:06 UTC

I appreciate the feedback! Thanks so much!

foxrafer January 19 2007, 12:09:05 UTC

This is so unique, so intriguing, and incredibly captivating. Wonderful job. I really love this.

cat_latin January 19 2007, 13:41:35 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks!

random_yayness January 21 2007, 09:51:30 UTC

Oh WOW. *sighs* This was absolutely beautiful. Dom/Viggo is a pairing that's not written nearly enough, especially with this level of depth and artistry and creative vision. Thank you SO MUCH for sharing this, and I really really hope to see more from you, from ANY pairing, in the near future.

Also? I completely agree with Viggo about the beautifulness and exquisiteness that is Dom. ♥ What I wouldn't give to see those photos and paitings. ;)

cat_latin January 23 2007, 19:45:30 UTC

*blush*
Thanks!