Title: Muse
Author: Cat Latin
Fandom: LOTR rps
Pairings: VM/? VM/DM
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 4771
Summary: Don’t abandon what inspires you.
Notes: Written for Shanalle’s 2 Lines Challenge, 2006
Disclaimer: Sadly, I do not know the lovely men. No profits were made; no harm is intended. This is a work of fiction.
2 Lines Assigned: I never took the
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"No," the disturbingly Dom-like thing agrees. "But you still want to touch me." Dom's eyes glitter up at Viggo from under his lashes. He stretches artfully, making his tattered low-riders dip lower, and Viggo's eyes stroke across the shadows under his ribs and hips. The photos spill to the floor. "So touch me."
This was so good, so very very good. The atmosphere, the blurred line between reality and hallucinations or fantasies, the visions of Dom who looked and behaved like Dom but not quite--contrasted with the real Dom. Fantastic story. And excellent writing. And it's one of my favorite pairings :).
PS. If I could offer a suggestion: it's much easier to read a story if there are blank lines between all paragraphs.
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Update: done. Hope that's easier on the eyes.
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Also? I completely agree with Viggo about the beautifulness and exquisiteness that is Dom. ♥ What I wouldn't give to see those photos and paitings. ;)
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Thanks!
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