As you may know I'm rewriting The Doors of Time into an original story in the hopes of being able to get it published sometime in the future. Apart from the obvious things like changing names and a few details to not make them quite as recognisable as Jensen and Jared there is other stuff as well. Correcting mistakes is one thing, plenty of those
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Now that I think back, if I really have to name one thing I'd like to see you elaborate more on is probably "Jensen's" time when he was institutionalized?
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Oh, I so agree on this one! Cuz there isn't much I would actually change, the story is amazing. But yea that would be interesting to see.
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As a published story, I think the mystery works better. The hints in my opinion are good enough and don't need elaborating because we can then empathize with the Jared character, because 'Jensen' certainly wouldn't (at least not yet) tell all that happened.
From a fan point of view - I so want to read what happened.
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Still, I have to admit I started making it up in my head in bed last night and it would make a interesting timestamp fanfic. I've been thinking I need to write something with the characters (as opposed to just editing what has already been written) in order to help me get them back into my head so... Who knows? *g*
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Plus (and I'm repeating myself here from other comments, lol) it is a lot easier saying a person has changed because of what happened to him than actually writing that change as it happens. Which would be a slow and very depressing progress.
But I must admit I have thought of it and even written a little of it, if only in my head, so who knows.
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Thank you for the good luck wishes. Much needed, I am sure. lol
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I'm planning on re-reading it again fairly soon so I'll let you know if anything jumps out but nothing springs to mind at the moment
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