Fic: The Things We Lost (4/?)

Sep 23, 2011 09:38

Title: The Things We Lost (4/?)
Author: Babette babettew54
Category: Smallville (AU)
Characters: Lois/Clark/Kal-El, Tess, Oliver, Lex
Rating: T
Summary: Lois and Clark must accept the cruel reality of their separation as they try to get back what they had lost.
Word Count: 2,900
Spoilers: Dominion (10.19)
Disclaimer: DC Comics, Warner Bros. Entertainment ( Read more... )

fic: the things we lost

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eternal_moonie September 23 2011, 16:26:25 UTC
AWESOME new chapter honey!

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babettew54 September 23 2011, 16:56:48 UTC
Thank you, hon!! These last two chapters were a bit plotty, but now we're moving into more interesting developments!!

Thanks again for reading! :D

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paradisekendra September 23 2011, 19:01:33 UTC
Beautiful chapter!!! I could not express in enough words how much this couple combo gets me running around my room in happy circles. *giddy*

I love how in character this is of the 10th season where Clark is a little calmer with Tess than Oliver. In seasons 8-9, Oliver was more easily on Tess's side (Hence Kandor, for example) but then he got a knot in his pants and it was like he reverted into a 12-year-old boy who didn't want anyone to know he had a crush on the popular, controversial girl.

So, I love that.

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I also love Clark and Oliver's conversation about Lois's "dating". Lois would OF COURSE be dating someone. She's one of the most beautiful women ever and she likes dating. She likes dating more than any other woman on the show---she's good at it in that she attracts men with her very open personality, though she often attracts jerks ( ... )

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babettew54 September 23 2011, 22:02:30 UTC
A calm Clark and an upset Clark ... they both excite me. I love writing him this way. He rarely showed any real emotion on the show. I guess that was part of his characterization. Keeping calm, not loosing it, because he could really hurt someone if that were to happen. Clark not loosing control is played up in the comics and it's understandable.

I was VERY tempted to give Tess a 'new man' but decided against it. Emil came to mind!! *LOL* Oliver would have definitely lost his mind then!! *lol*

On another subject, a DI commenter just brought of Chloe and why she hasn't been mentioned yet. She will be mentioned in the next chapter and again in Chapter 6. I hope it will satisfy her.

Clark is very determined (ballsy Clark), you know I love him like that.

Thanks hon! :D *hugs*

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paradisekendra September 23 2011, 22:42:55 UTC
Emil and Tess. Way to make me stop reading the fic! LOL ( ... )

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babettew54 September 24 2011, 00:09:23 UTC
*LMAO* I know you're not joking either. I can't loose any more reviewers!! I need you! :D:D So no, as soon as I thought of Emil, I dismissed him... no way are we going down that road again. *Shaking my head* at the writers for that stupid idea!! Yeah, very PLEASANT!! NOT!! :D

Oh, yes, I agree. Clark standing up, making his own decisions (without Chloe telling him what to do), yeah, that's sexy and HOT!

*lol* I know you can't wait until I mention her, right!?? It will be brief (in both chapters). You'll see! :D

I'm sending you a p-m! :D

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crazy4ew September 25 2011, 01:45:07 UTC
their special spot! Nice touch. The suspense is building... what with the imminent Lois-Lex interview and the Omega-marked BF... You are eeeevil!! *g* Hurry up Clark! Make it all better. :)

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babettew54 September 25 2011, 08:00:02 UTC
**cackles with glee* I have to get folks to come back and find out what happens next, right??

Clark will be in action real soon now!! Don't doubt our guy! :D

Thank you so much for sticking around, and thanks for letting me know your thoughts! :D:D

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athena606 December 2 2011, 21:34:02 UTC
I was just going to ask about Chloe but you've already answered that i see. loving the clois and tollie!!

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babettew54 December 3 2011, 00:16:20 UTC
Yep, no Chloe in this story, but Tollie will be here!! :D:D

Thanks hon for coming over! :D

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