Fic: The Things We Lost (4/?)

Sep 23, 2011 09:38

Title: The Things We Lost (4/?)
Author: Babette babettew54
Category: Smallville (AU)
Characters: Lois/Clark/Kal-El, Tess, Oliver, Lex
Rating: T
Summary: Lois and Clark must accept the cruel reality of their separation as they try to get back what they had lost.
Word Count: 2,900
Spoilers: Dominion (10.19)
Disclaimer: DC Comics, Warner Bros. Entertainment ( Read more... )

fic: the things we lost

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paradisekendra September 23 2011, 19:01:33 UTC
Beautiful chapter!!! I could not express in enough words how much this couple combo gets me running around my room in happy circles. *giddy*

I love how in character this is of the 10th season where Clark is a little calmer with Tess than Oliver. In seasons 8-9, Oliver was more easily on Tess's side (Hence Kandor, for example) but then he got a knot in his pants and it was like he reverted into a 12-year-old boy who didn't want anyone to know he had a crush on the popular, controversial girl.

So, I love that.

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I also love Clark and Oliver's conversation about Lois's "dating". Lois would OF COURSE be dating someone. She's one of the most beautiful women ever and she likes dating. She likes dating more than any other woman on the show---she's good at it in that she attracts men with her very open personality, though she often attracts jerks ( ... )

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babettew54 September 23 2011, 22:02:30 UTC
A calm Clark and an upset Clark ... they both excite me. I love writing him this way. He rarely showed any real emotion on the show. I guess that was part of his characterization. Keeping calm, not loosing it, because he could really hurt someone if that were to happen. Clark not loosing control is played up in the comics and it's understandable.

I was VERY tempted to give Tess a 'new man' but decided against it. Emil came to mind!! *LOL* Oliver would have definitely lost his mind then!! *lol*

On another subject, a DI commenter just brought of Chloe and why she hasn't been mentioned yet. She will be mentioned in the next chapter and again in Chapter 6. I hope it will satisfy her.

Clark is very determined (ballsy Clark), you know I love him like that.

Thanks hon! :D *hugs*

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paradisekendra September 23 2011, 22:42:55 UTC
Emil and Tess. Way to make me stop reading the fic! LOL ( ... )

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babettew54 September 24 2011, 00:09:23 UTC
*LMAO* I know you're not joking either. I can't loose any more reviewers!! I need you! :D:D So no, as soon as I thought of Emil, I dismissed him... no way are we going down that road again. *Shaking my head* at the writers for that stupid idea!! Yeah, very PLEASANT!! NOT!! :D

Oh, yes, I agree. Clark standing up, making his own decisions (without Chloe telling him what to do), yeah, that's sexy and HOT!

*lol* I know you can't wait until I mention her, right!?? It will be brief (in both chapters). You'll see! :D

I'm sending you a p-m! :D

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paradisekendra September 24 2011, 00:18:51 UTC
Awwww, I just noticed your little "hero" Tess icon. Did you make that? That's exactly what she is! It's sort of a weird dynamic because Tess, being Watchtower and into superhero...stuff, kinda kept Clark and Oliver in line in the last season and Lois, while helping out, is such an independent strong woman that she was absolutely supportive, but I didn't see her feeling it was her "job" to monitor the boys as much as Tess did.

And I know! I can only throw up so many times, please no Tess/Emil. None of Lois sleeping with Oliver or Grant, (or AC for that matter, ewww!) but you could put Tess or Lois with say Bruce or Hal, those could work. You know, like...worthy men. And I liked Hawkman too, wtf did they kill him for?

Well that, "without Chloe telling him what to do". That is exactly what she did. In my fic, I try to give her a life of her own, outside of being Clark's side kick and Lana's best friend and Lois's cousin. She needed her own identity and I hope I give her one. :)

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babettew54 September 24 2011, 00:50:05 UTC
You like my 'Tess hero' icon?! I made that just today! I love that look on her face like ... 'back off' or 'wtf'!! *lol* She's probably looking at Oliver! *heee* I'm pretty sure it's from Dominion too.

Yeah, the writers kept Lois away from Watchtower for some reason, even after she fould out the truth (well, of course, she couldn't be there before that)! But yeah, I got that vibe too.

Tess was in her element at Watchtower, no question, and I loved that about her. That was the turning point in their relationship. We wanted more for them, but it was not to be... *stoopid writers ... grrrrrr*

Yes, yes, yes, sounds perfect for Chloe. She needed that, and it took the final minutes of the series for the writers to finally wake up and get her far away from Smallville, far away from Oliver... *bye Chloe*!! :D:D

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paradisekendra September 24 2011, 03:00:16 UTC
I love that look on her face like ... 'back off' or 'wtf'!! *lol* She's probably looking at Oliver! *heee*

Hahaha, totally laughed at that. TRUE! She's grumpy! It's so funny because Tess is so threatening sometimes but Cassidy's such a big goofball that that's effected Tess's "threatening power" and now I kinda do more of a "awww, it's Tess!" when before I saw Cassidy I was like, "I would not wanna meet this bitch in a dark alley." LOL, you know?

I know! Why wasn't Lois included more? Hell, why wasn't Oliver included more? When the hell did this become the Clark and Tess show? I love them both, but no swapping!

*yes yes, my big opinions*

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babettew54 September 24 2011, 13:17:57 UTC
When the hell did this become the Clark and Tess show? I love them both, but no swapping!

You know that's true, especially toward the back-end. It was very distracting. We know now what the writers were doing, building toward that crazy finale, but at the expense of Clois? That was not a good idea.

Cassidy was just phenominal in the series. I truly enjoyed her final scenes on the show. I must find that episode of her from last night. Do you normally watch CSI-NY? I don't..

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Sorry I passed out last night... I guess it was around 10:00 just before your email arrived...

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paradisekendra September 24 2011, 19:18:02 UTC
No, I don't normally watch CSI-NY. I am not a cop/detective show person. But I of course turned it on for her and it was really weird to see her play someone *so* the opposite of Tess.

She looked like a giant little girl with the outfit she had on. She was precious!

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babettew54 September 25 2011, 07:53:52 UTC
Ohh, I wanna see that. We must keep each other informed of these 'guest appearances' by our favorite actors from the show!! Ok???

I don't know if you've realized it yet, but in this story both Lois and Tess work for Lex. I swear I didn't plan it that way ... it just happened! No one has mentioned that.. !!:D

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paradisekendra September 25 2011, 19:37:03 UTC
Yes! Please. I am working on being able to stomach Erica and Cassidy's next guest stars in "sexual" roles that to me are far beneath them, but I'll see what I can manage. Either way, knowing when they're on would be great.

I personally just constantly want them playing the "alpha females" of Lois and Tess forever. Erica's good at the strength and quirky humor and the layers she had in Seasons 4-8, and Cassidy playing a woman with so many layers and also kick ass, I swear, where's our new show with Erica, Cassidy, Justin and Tom? We need a campaign!

And I love the way your mind thinks if you had Lois & Tess working for Lex. I love them kicking ass or experiencing things that could bring them closer together.

So I am deeply looking forward to more!

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babettew54 September 25 2011, 23:39:10 UTC
Oh, dear, really? Well, that's what's on television, unfortunately ... jiggle, jiggle. *SMH*

Please ladies, don't compromise on your careers with roles that are beneath you.

That doesn't make me happy. That eppy of CSI-NY should be up by now... goes to look for it!

Yes, I agree, both of them working for Lex hasn't compromised what they believe in and what they're trying to accomplish. Go, ladies!! :D

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